CH 30 - My first triptych

Relocin

I took these pictures just last night.

aero-nut

I definately like the amber color that the pics take on. I'm assuming it was caused by the lighting. The middle picture is neat, but seems to be lacking something. Maybe it is that I can't exactly figure out what the focus of the picture is. I like the idea, and would love to see you expand on it a little.

johno

Very nice... Looks cold. What your theme for this pic? I do like the amber look. It really adds to the shots. The only thing I have trouble with is the flow. I am not sure where this one is going, or what it's trying to say. But, I am new to this and I am still working out of the novice state.

peace.
johno~

landrum

I like the shots. The white blur in the corner of the middle shot is distracting. I really like the first shot, and I'd like to see the last shot with an equivelent angle to mirror the first. I do think that you are on to something though. Good ideas.


Laurie

Relocin

Update
Thanks for the feedback.
I wasn't really satisfied with the center picture either so I changed it. As for the 3rd image, I just reversed it. I like it all a bit better now.
I also added some text at the bottom, I'm not sure if I should keep that on or lose it.

wxwax

The thing about it is, the original center image told the story. But I agree, it wasn't very will lit. Good thinking, I say.

mercphoto

Relocin wrote:

Thanks for the feedback.
I wasn't really satisfied with the center picture either so I changed it. As for the 3rd image, I just reversed it. I like it all a bit better now.
I also added some text at the bottom, I'm not sure if I should keep that on or lose it.

I like the right-hand image the original way, because the lines in it were the opposite of the lines in the left image.

Jenny

mercphoto wrote:

I like the right-hand image the original way, because the lines in it were the opposite of the lines in the left image.

I agree. The lighting in the original outside two seem to bring it together a little more.

judyfuess

I like this one a lot. You may want to try flipping the first one so that the two streets are leading to the park bench picture.

Relocin wrote:

Thanks for the feedback.
I wasn't really satisfied with the center picture either so I changed it. As for the 3rd image, I just reversed it. I like it all a bit better now.
I also added some text at the bottom, I'm not sure if I should keep that on or lose it.

Relocin

Updated again
Okay thanks again for all your input.
Now I just need to make a decision on which photo to use for the center. In the very first one, I did my best to get rid of the blur.
I'm going to submit one of these into this months photo challenge..... when I make a decision on which one.

gregneil

I like the walking shot w/out the blur. Better than the tree shot, IMO.

landrum

The walking picture, for sure! Nice job on removing the blur! I like it!