What do you think?

RaidrallyriderRaidrallyrider Registered Users Posts: 7 Beginner grinner
edited January 17, 2005 in Landscapes
I am here to learn.

Tell me is this shot worth keeping?
(one of my first B/W's)

DSC_0001.jpg

Comments

  • ian408ian408 Administrators Posts: 21,940 moderator
    edited January 17, 2005
    The markings lead you through the picture as does the "S" curve. If you
    could re-take the picture focusing on just one of those, the image might
    be more compelling. The split leads me off in two directions.

    The contrast between sky and the road surface is very nice as well.
    Have you tried to lighten the houses at all? Lightening the center would
    even out the exposure.

    Lastly, the light poles and perhaps even the houses on the ridge are
    distracting. The houses because you can't really see them. The light
    poles because they clutter the image.

    Here's a very quick stab at PS'ing it.
    Moderator Journeys/Sports/Big Picture :: Need some help with dgrin?
  • RaidrallyriderRaidrallyrider Registered Users Posts: 7 Beginner grinner
    edited January 17, 2005
    You are right. Maybe the pic needs a focal point at the end of the road. I removed the poles but lightening the houses causes loss of contrast and reduces detail. Maybe I am not doing it right. Thank you for your helpful comments.

    DSC_0001.2.jpg
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