Car collage advice sought

mercphoto

Put together a collage of my car and looking for advice. Its rather simple. I have a more complex one but I think its too busy. The center image of the start button is on the car's dashboard (push-button start, not a key-start). The S2000 banner across the top is from the side of the car itself.

Thanks for any input. I might post the more busy one later.

DavidTO

For one thing, I'd separate the images with some kind of rule.

mercphoto

DavidTO wrote:

For one thing, I'd separate the images with some kind of rule.

Like this? I'm also hoping to get a passenger-side profile to replace the bottom-left photo.

mercphoto

Two changes to that bottom-left image. I think I like the first one best.

DavidTO

I agree. First one.

Is Engine Start really important? You could move the nameplate down, make it a touch smaller and put it where the button is.

The rules....I might try just a tad thinner?

mercphoto

DavidTO wrote:

Is Engine Start really important? You could move the nameplate down, make it a touch smaller and put it where the button is. The rules....I might try just a tad thinner?

I guess I kinda like the start button. Its also a unique feature of the car itself. Here's with thinner rules.

JBurt

mercphoto wrote:

I guess I kinda like the start button. Its also a unique feature of the car itself. Here's with thinner rules.

The thinner rules look better. Show me something else unique to your car rather than 2 front shots. How about a shot of the interior or suspension or...

mercphoto

JBurt wrote:

The thinner rules look better. Show me something else unique to your car rather than 2 front shots. How about a shot of the interior or suspension or...

How's this? I need to re-take it but it gives you an idea.

JBurt

Looks good. Choose the parts of your car that you are most proud of or are the most distinct to highlight.
I used to offer 8x10 and 12x18 collages. Like any other graphic design, placement of the images is critical.
8x10
http://jburtphotos.smugmug.com/photos/127566623-M.jpg
12x18
http://jburtphotos.smugmug.com/photos/93140399-M.jpg