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Portrait B & W

frgfrg Registered Users Posts: 583 Major grins
edited February 19, 2007 in People
Still experimenting with my speedlight.... not really sure where I was going with this one ,but kinda like the result.tell me what you think?
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    PhotosbychuckPhotosbychuck Registered Users Posts: 1,239 Major grins
    edited February 18, 2007
    Hi, frg
    Nice Photo!
    A different angle would get the glasses frames out of the way so, you could see the eyes better.

    Take Care,
    Charles Cassidy,
    Cassidy's Photography,
    http://www.modellocate.com/action/goto/uid=4447
    D300S, 18-200mm VR, 70-300mm VR

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    CarnalSighCarnalSigh Registered Users Posts: 152 Major grins
    edited February 18, 2007
    My 2 Cents
    I really like the feel of the shot and the lighting. The shadows look great. The soft yet sharp image is striking. Tho I find my eyes being pulled to the backdrop (fan shaped lines) behind him, they are not bright enough to over power him. What I don't like is the pose and the glasses shadow under his eye. He looks startled, like he's leaning back away from a sasquatch that just walked into the room. A gentle grin, a glance off to one side, and maybe even a little closer crop would have been ideal I think. I am not trying to be critical, but the pose in this one makes or breaks it.
    I use only Canon cameras and glass
    www.portraitwhisperer.com
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    frgfrg Registered Users Posts: 583 Major grins
    edited February 19, 2007
    Thanks for Looking.... appreciate the comments and suggestions, it all goes towards my learning , so critique away!!!
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