At the Playground

DavidS

Here are a few pictures of my youngest daughter at the school playground down the street. C&C welcome. Is the flash too heavy? How is the color? How is the exposure?

Skippy

DavidS wrote:

Here are a few pictures of my youngest daughter at the school playground down the street. C&C welcome.

Gosh David they grow up fast don't they
She's a very pretty little girl, gonna be a heartbreaker for sure
Lovely shots ........ Skippy
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DavidS

Skippy wrote:

Gosh David they grow up fast don't they
She's a very pretty little girl, gonna be a heartbreaker for sure
Lovely shots ........ Skippy
.

Thanks Skippy. They do grow up too fast.

Thiago Sigrist

Lovely...
Hi David... you asked 'bout the exposure and colors... and all I can say they are great!

#1 is a stunning portrait, her face looks so innocent and gentle... great shot!

Thanks a lot for sharing!
Take care!

-- thiago

DavidS

Thiago Sigrist wrote:

Hi David... you asked 'bout the exposure and colors... and all I can say they are great!

#1 is a stunning portrait, her face looks so innocent and gentle... great shot!

Thanks a lot for sharing!
Take care!

-- thiago

Thanks Thiago. I appreciate your taking the time to comment. Your feedback helps.

photogmomma

#1 - Love the lighting, color and composition. Great job!

#2, 3 - Too posed, which I know happens at this age! ! She's a cutie, but the expressions seem to be for the camera and not because she's having fun. I do LOVE the poses - fun!

#4 - My favorite. Seems to be more natural... You may try bumping the contrast to see if that brings it out more. I'd also love to see this in B&W. I bet it would be nice! You could crop a bit off the top and help the composition a bit.

Great series! Gorgeous girl!

DavidS

photogmomma wrote:

#1 - Love the lighting, color and composition. Great job!

#2, 3 - Too posed, which I know happens at this age! ! She's a cutie, but the expressions seem to be for the camera and not because she's having fun. I do LOVE the poses - fun!

#4 - My favorite. Seems to be more natural... You may try bumping the contrast to see if that brings it out more. I'd also love to see this in B&W. I bet it would be nice! You could crop a bit off the top and help the composition a bit.

Great series! Gorgeous girl!

Thanks Andi. Your feedback is very helpful. I "sandwiched 2&3 in the middle, because I didn't feel they were my stronger shots. I will try your suggestions on #4. Thanks again.

System

I too liked #4 the best-

I also felt the poses on the others were too forced where as the last was most natural-


sent you a pm-

macmac

I like 1 & 4 also.

DavidS

Thanks George and Joe. I appreciate your feedback.