Fairly urgent help needed.

thebigsky

Hi,

I've taken this shot of my mother-in-law's father and we'd like to give her a framed print for Mothers' Day.

Any critique on how to make this image better would be gratefully received. The nasty black blobs in the background are unfortunately flash shadows, should I try and change the background, if so how easy would this be?

Also, is the B/W conversion working, how can I improve it and other comments on preparing this image before print would be very much appreciated.



Thanks in advance,

Charlie

Shay Stephens

I would print nearly as is. The B&W looks good, the background is fine. The expression is great. The only thing I would tweek is the brightness of the shirt. I would tone that down a little bit so it is not competing with the face so much. Then it's off to print!

thebigsky

Thanks Shay, what would I do, select the shirt with the lasso tool and then lower its lightness value?

Charlie

wxwax

If you shot it in RAW, make a second exposure wih the shirt not as bright, make the second exposure a second layer, make a mask and brush in the shirt.

If not shot in RAW, make a duplicate layer, bring down the brightness, again make a mask and brush in the shirt.

Shay Stephens

wxwax wrote:

If you shot it in RAW, make a second exposure wih the shirt not as bright, make the second exposure a second layer, make a mask and brush in the shirt.

If not shot in RAW, make a duplicate layer, bring down the brightness, again make a mask and brush in the shirt.

thebigsky

Thanks guys, I did shoot in Raw so I'll have a go.

Charlie

Andy

Hi Charlie,

Easy to do. You can recover a lot of the blown shirt, and even some of his eyebrow hairs

You can do it in raw, sure- or you can use CS2's shadow/highlight and only recover the highlights on the shirt, by using a layer mask. And take a tiny bit away from the shine on the face. Your first edit on the right.

thebigsky

Thanks Andy,

That's excellent work, I think I need to stop taking pictures for a while and sit down and learn some photoshop so I'm not put off attempting these things.

Charlie

Nimai

Andy wrote:

use CS2's shadow/highlight and only recover the highlights on the shirt, by using a layer mask.

"Layer Mask. Layer Mask. Must learn to use Layer Masks..." Haha-
I love the shadow/highlight tool, but I never use Layer Masks... and I've been using Photoshop for years!
One of these days...

Shay Stephens

Nimai wrote:

"Layer Mask. Layer Mask. Must learn to use Layer Masks..." Haha-
I love the shadow/highlight tool, but I never use Layer Masks... and I've been using Photoshop for years!
One of these days...

The layer mask will quite literally change your world. Even if you had to take time off work, it would be worth it. Don't edit another photo until you learn layer masking.

Nimai

Shay Stephens wrote:

The layer mask will quite literally change your world. Even if you had to take time off work, it would be worth it. Don't edit another photo until you learn layer masking.

Sir, yes sir!

wxwax

Nimai wrote:

"Layer Mask. Layer Mask. Must learn to use Layer Masks..." Haha-
I love the shadow/highlight tool, but I never use Layer Masks... and I've been using Photoshop for years!
One of these days...

Oh, man, it opens up a whole new world.

Andy

Nimai wrote:

"Layer Mask. Layer Mask. Must learn to use Layer Masks..." Haha-
I love the shadow/highlight tool, but I never use Layer Masks... and I've been using Photoshop for years!
One of these days...

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