LPS - Chilled Advice

windozewindoze Registered Users Posts: 2,830 Major grins
edited March 17, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges
ok, my idea ( so dont steal it ) is "Chilled to the Bone "
I have to work more on this in regard to composition and DOF but I was curious from those who offer advice what other suggestions could you offer?
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or this one ??

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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    Intresting idea... what is that in his hand? That's distracting.
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  • windozewindoze Registered Users Posts: 2,830 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    pyroPrints.com wrote:
    Intresting idea... what is that in his hand? That's distracting.


    lol, its an ice pick / shovel.
    i was hoping it gave "life" to the skeleton so that it wouldnt be mistaken just for a frozen skeleton.....
    thanx,


    troy
  • VisualXpressionsVisualXpressions Registered Users Posts: 860 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    chilled to the bone
    I like it... super idea... I would ax the shovel though...

    Winston
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    VisualXpressions wrote:
    I like it... super idea... I would ax the shovel though...

    Winston

    Yep!
    Very Cool (literally) idea! thumb.gif
    Suggestions: ditch the toy, make it BW, make it grim (add some mist for the latter...)
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
  • FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    Definitely chilly in more ways than one!

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  • windozewindoze Registered Users Posts: 2,830 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    Nikolai wrote:
    Yep!
    Very Cool (literally) idea! thumb.gif
    Suggestions: ditch the toy, make it BW, make it grim (add some mist for the latter...)

    do ya think this works at all?
    136609409-M.jpg

    troy
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    Troy,
    windoze wrote:
    do ya think this works at all?
    troy

    I think it's better... Still has some the festive feeling due to the harsh sun shades, which kinda contradicts with the idea. Using diffuser or some PS should help... thumb.gif
    "May the f/stop be with you!"
  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    Much better
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  • SystemSystem Registered Users Posts: 8,186 moderator
    edited March 17, 2007
    I like the first image the best though it feels just slightly OOF. It doesn't feel as contrived as the others.
  • VisualXpressionsVisualXpressions Registered Users Posts: 860 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    truth wrote:
    I like the first image the best though it feels just slightly OOF. It doesn't feel as contrived as the others.


    I agree with Truth... without the shovel...

    Winston
    http://www.vxphotography.smugmug.com/
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