where did she go to?

spakospako Registered Users Posts: 68 Big grins
edited March 21, 2007 in Landscapes
I took this shot last summer in Netherland.. hope youlike it..

holland2.jpg

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  • Van IsleVan Isle Registered Users Posts: 384 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    Nice shot! clap.gif I'm really grooving on it, colours, shapes, lines, subject, it works for me. Thanks for sharing.
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  • bigpixbigpix Registered Users Posts: 371 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    Good capture....... lots of interest
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  • ShepsMomShepsMom Registered Users Posts: 4,319 Major grins
    edited March 17, 2007
    Love it, very unique. thumb.gif
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  • spakospako Registered Users Posts: 68 Big grins
    edited March 20, 2007
    Thank you :-) I appreciate the comments :-)
  • NirNir Registered Users Posts: 1,400 Major grins
    edited March 20, 2007
    spako, it's a beautiful shot! i love the lighting on the girl and the beautiful sunset!

    i'd like to make a suggestion - in my eyes there are two main subjects in the frame - the girl and the sunset. that's good - keep it simple. the left 1/3 of the frame serves no purpose - crop it. i'd also take out some of the sky and clouds because they add an additional focus point, harming the simplicity.
    that would leave you with a frame better correlating to the rule of thirds - the girl and the sunset would really pop out and get the attention they deserve.

    what do you think?
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  • spakospako Registered Users Posts: 68 Big grins
    edited March 20, 2007
    Hi Nir.... thank you for the input.. I tried to follow your instructions and here is thenew version.. is it approximately what you thought?

    holland4.jpg
  • NirNir Registered Users Posts: 1,400 Major grins
    edited March 20, 2007
    spako, i think so! what do you think?
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  • spakospako Registered Users Posts: 68 Big grins
    edited March 20, 2007
    Yes I think it works better.. there's more balance to the shot... althought now I would have preferred to a have a larger gap between the woman an the sun...
  • JeroenJeroen Registered Users Posts: 447 Major grins
    edited March 21, 2007
    I like the 2nd version.
    I love that little backlight on her face...
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