Suggestions on my PS Treament!

jmaccs64

These are some pictures I took of a bowling alley that will be closing in May! I am looking for some suggestions, critiques of my treatment in PS for these photos! I am going to post the original and the treated picture!
Thanks for looking in advance! The original is obviously always on the left!
I really appreciate your insights!
Thanks

Aaron Bernard

Your treatments look good. Id like the first shot of the outside a lot more if the cars were not there.

Where is this located?

Marc Muench

story
Joey

What is the story?

This will determine how these images, as a group should be prepared.

cocasana

I think your PS worl is quite good! Clouds look o bit odd in the first one!

jmaccs64

This is located in Broadview, IL. It is a bowling alley that will be torn down in May 2007! Thank you for you comments!

Is there anything you all would have done differently?

Marc Muench

jmaccs64 wrote:

This is located in Broadview, IL. It is a bowling alley that will be torn down in May 2007! Thank you for you comments!

Is there anything you all would have done differently?

Joey

I am curious about what type of feel you want these images to portray. As an example, I always have something in mind when I begin post work such as, does the image need to be bright or dark overall, does the image need to be somber or happy overall, is there a subject that needs to become central in the theme? If you understand this prior to your post work you will have some focus. Once I understand what you are attempting to do with these images I can give you some feedback on how your post looks.

USAIR

Just my .02
I like all shots on the left...others little too over saturated.
These would make nice collage...I think

Fred