CH31 away from children

johno

OK... Here is my first attempt, what do you think? Does it work?


Remember, BE SAFE!

peace.
johno~

johno

I guess by the sound of silence this my not be a good submission. :cry My wife won't let me have the lysol spray.

peace.
johno~

ginger_55

lysol spray?

That is a good flame there. I think the match thing would be better if it were your son playing with them. Don't suppose your wife would like that, either.

ginger

Michiel de Brieder

Hey I overlooked this one
Okay, to the photo!! I think the idea is very good! I like the composition alot, but there is one little thing that bugs me, that is the lack of the top of the flame.. I would have liked to have seen that included. The flame colours are terrific BTW!

DavidTO

johno wrote:

I guess by the sound of silence this my not be a good submission. :cry My wife won't let me have the lysol spray.

peace.
johno~

I think it's a good idea. The focal point seems to be forward of the match.

I like the idea, the wisps of smoke and the basic composition. Focus, focus, focus.

aero-nut

Yeah, composition-wise I would suggest trying to capture the whole flame in the shot. Great idea!

landrum

I agree with getting the whole flame in the shot. Either that or just crop it in tighter eliminating the extra black space. What do ya think?