LPS4: Space Girl

Manfr3dManfr3d Registered Users Posts: 2,008 Major grins
edited April 22, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges
Just an idea, what do you think?

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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2007
    Manfr3d wrote:
    Just an idea, what do you think?

    Is it organic? mwink.gif
    Dunno, man, it's just not a wall hanger for me... ne_nau.gif
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  • urbanariesurbanaries Registered Users Posts: 2,690 Major grins
    edited April 21, 2007
    I love the motion blur, the composition and the interpretation. she's as artificial as artificial gets.

    The contrast could withstand some amping, though! other than that I think the composition is right on. nice!
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  • Manfr3dManfr3d Registered Users Posts: 2,008 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2007
    Thanks for your comments! Here is a contrast (and saturation) enhanced version:

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  • Manfr3dManfr3d Registered Users Posts: 2,008 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2007
    Maybe a bit closer framed?

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    ― Edward Weston
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2007
    Manfr3d wrote:
    Maybe a bit closer framed?
    You know, maybe if you clone out the pole and make the mermaid floating against the ferrywheel by herself...ne_nau.gif Just an idea deal.gif
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  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited April 22, 2007
    I agree w/Nik
    The pole is taking away from the colors/motion as it becomes the stable centerpiece for the shot.....it should float..as in make our eyes spin.
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