LPS#4: Does this work?

douglas

Does this work for LPS#4?

Nikolai

Douglas,

douglas wrote:

Does this work for LPS#4?

Good idea (in fact I was wondering why nobody tried it yet:-)
I think it would work better

• without the darn contrail
• if there was a longer expansion of the sand/soil on the left
• with less or more sky

Pretty much all doable in PS...
Care to try?
Good luck!

douglas

Thanks Nik, I was wondering if it would look better without the contrial, havent tried to remove although it should be pretty easy. As far as more sand to the left, ill take a look at some of my others from the same shoot and see if I can find more worth posting.

douglas

Heres a couple more, still not sure which I like best, any thoughts?

douglas

and # 1 with contrail removed

wildviper

I like with the above suggestions, but two things:

1. Is this a real plan or artificial? Looks artificial.

2. Not too keen with the lighting. Seems like flash.

Nikolai

douglas wrote:

Heres a couple more, still not sure which I like best, any thoughts?

I like #2 (i.e. last one of the new couple)

douglas

wildviper wrote:

I like with the above suggestions, but two things:

1. Is this a real plan or artificial? Looks artificial.

2. Not too keen with the lighting. Seems like flash.

Thanks wildviper, it is artificial. And yes the lighting is flash, i wasnt getinng any detail without it.
which one do you like best?

douglas

Nikolai wrote:

I like #2 (i.e. last one of the new couple)

Thanks Nik!

wildviper

douglas wrote:

Thanks wildviper, it is artificial. And yes the lighting is flash, i wasnt getinng any detail without it.
which one do you like best?

The horizantal one..#2 is it I think

sherstone

I agree
The second landscape version is my favorite too.

VisualXpressions

The landscape version...
I like the landscape version the best... The clouds also look artaficial which makes the artaficial case even stronger... good job!

Winston

Swartzy

Douglas...
I prefer the landscape shot with the sky light. That's a nice shot. The fact that it's in sand makes me wonder if it's real or not...which works well.

douglas

Thanks for comments everyone, it is much appreciated. I will enter the lanscape version.

ChrisJ

douglas wrote:

Thanks for comments everyone, it is much appreciated. I will enter the lanscape version.

Definitely my favorite, too... You might try a slight horizon correction, it looks slightly tilted to the right.