The OTHER way #4

SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
edited April 24, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges
Sorry for yet another thread peeps but need help again. Watcha think about this?

Orchid Illume
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  • pemmettpemmett Registered Users Posts: 507 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2007
    Nice abstract but.....what is itheadscratch.gif
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  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2007
    Abstract????
    It's a fake orchid, lit up.
    Swartzy:
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  • ChrisJChrisJ Registered Users Posts: 2,164 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2007
    Hmm... it looks very clinical to me. My eye bounces between the two flowers and settles on the fibers in the background. Maybe a more dramatic composition?
    Chris
  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited April 23, 2007
    Thanks Chris...New one
    ChrisJ wrote:
    Hmm... it looks very clinical to me. My eye bounces between the two flowers and settles on the fibers in the background. Maybe a more dramatic composition?
    Better?

    Illuminated Orchid
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    Swartzy:
    NAPP Member | Canon Shooter
    Weddings/Portraits and anything else that catches my eye.
    www.daveswartz.com
    Model Mayhem site http://www.modelmayhem.com/686552
  • sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited April 24, 2007
    Out of the two the first sharper more defined version is better,
    it does say artificial yes,
    but I have to agree with ChrisJ, my eye lands in the same place too.
    Sean
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited April 24, 2007
    Sorry, David, this does not fly ne_nau.gif
    I like #1 better than #2 but I don't think it's enough.
    No worries, you have 6 more days, for somebody it was enough to create the whole Earth :-) lol3.gif
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  • SwartzySwartzy Registered Users Posts: 3,293 Major grins
    edited April 24, 2007
    Okey Dokey
    Drat....here I thought it was a pretty cool shot. Thanks gang...guess we go to plan "C" and create the Earth rolleyes1.gif
    Swartzy:
    NAPP Member | Canon Shooter
    Weddings/Portraits and anything else that catches my eye.
    www.daveswartz.com
    Model Mayhem site http://www.modelmayhem.com/686552
  • sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited April 24, 2007
    actually.....
    Creating the Earth is not a bad idea....

    The image of a food solar system just popped into my head.
    Yes most of my "minds eye" images are fantastical, but that idea might work, even on a table top. ne_nau.gif
    Sean
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