This is one very pretty lady! And, from a technical aspect, I love the capture - very well done. And, WOW - love her eyes!!!
Love the way the background through the window is thrown OOF but I worry about things growing out the top of people's heads (minor nit!).
The PP is interesting but I'm not sure it is flattering for a young lady. Would it work better with people with more "character" in their face (translated - those with texture and wrinkles)?
Well George
I think the capture is fabulous. The lighting, the pose, the setting is spot on. The PS though (and I realize it's supposed to be a stretch) really makes here look as though she needs some serious nutrition changes. I think it's cool how you've been processing these images but this one doesn't cut it for such a beautiful young lady.......but.....for artistic purposes and out of the norm.....heh, what ever floats your boat
This is one very pretty lady! And, from a technical aspect, I love the capture - very well done. And, WOW - love her eyes!!!
Love the way the background through the window is thrown OOF but I worry about things growing out the top of people's heads (minor nit!).
The PP is interesting but I'm not sure it is flattering for a young lady. Would it work better with people with more "character" in their face (translated - those with texture and wrinkles)?
ah, head growths!-
didn't think about it-
and yeah, probably is better suited for someone with 'character'-
I think the capture is fabulous. The lighting, the pose, the setting is spot on. The PS though (and I realize it's supposed to be a stretch) really makes here look as though she needs some serious nutrition changes. I think it's cool how you've been processing these images but this one doesn't cut it for such a beautiful young lady.......but.....for artistic purposes and out of the norm.....heh, what ever floats your boat
I appreciate what your saying (see scott's comments)-
Hi George! The 2nd attempt is much better but maybe too much saturation? I always love your conversions, but agree with others that they only work with certain subjects. I think what i'm not keen on is the lack of detail in her hair and how flat and dark the processing makes it. It still could use a lighter, more feminine touch for me. This may sound weird, but it's also Spring and dark/moody doesn't seem to go with prom pics and it just seems to conflict with that beautiful smile and pretty eyes. You did a nice job (as always) I just would approach it differently myself. How many hours have you put into this one already?
My monitor (I'm at work right now) is not calibrated so I can't comment on the color. But, I have found that a hue/saturation layer (with appropriate masking) can be effectively used to control the amount of red/yellow you get in the skin. Another way to get from her to there is through the use of a color balance layer and, again, appropriate masking.
Anyway you cut it, the last image is a more "appropriate" rendition of such a beautiful lady. Before the prom - hmmm looking at your life line, I see a troubled future in store
this is only the fourth (2nd girl) I've been through-
hah!-
I'll be 58 by the time she graduates!-
re color-
when I say yellow, this is a bit more than 'yellow'-
it's that kind of nasty color that I'm not so sure can be dealt with by hue/sat or color balance-
I've found I can fine-tune skintone problems much easier in LR by using minor white balance tweaks, along with the eight-channel HSL color sliders. I have tried to duplicate the same process in photoshop with inferior results. I hope i'm not coming off as condescending, you obviously have way more experience with Photoshop than me
I've found I can fine-tune skintone problems much easier in LR by using minor white balance tweaks, along with the eight-channel HSL color sliders. I have tried to duplicate the same process in photoshop with inferior results. I hope i'm not coming off as condescending, you obviously have way more experience with Photoshop than me
lynne-
re condescending-
good grief, no, I don't think that!-
in fact, as soon as I get the opportunity, I'm going to check it out-
Adjustment layer/selective color/neutral - adjust slider appx. 15 to the left. Easy peasy. I haven't calibrated lately so this is just an approximation.
Comments
Love the way the background through the window is thrown OOF but I worry about things growing out the top of people's heads (minor nit!).
The PP is interesting but I'm not sure it is flattering for a young lady. Would it work better with people with more "character" in their face (translated - those with texture and wrinkles)?
My Photos
Thoughts on photographing a wedding, How to post a picture, AF Microadjustments?, Light Scoop
Equipment List - Check my profile
I think the capture is fabulous. The lighting, the pose, the setting is spot on. The PS though (and I realize it's supposed to be a stretch) really makes here look as though she needs some serious nutrition changes. I think it's cool how you've been processing these images but this one doesn't cut it for such a beautiful young lady.......but.....for artistic purposes and out of the norm.....heh, what ever floats your boat
NAPP Member | Canon Shooter
Weddings/Portraits and anything else that catches my eye.
www.daveswartz.com
Model Mayhem site http://www.modelmayhem.com/686552
ah, head growths!-
didn't think about it-
and yeah, probably is better suited for someone with 'character'-
thanks for looking and commenting-
I appreciate what your saying (see scott's comments)-
thanks for looking and commenting-
Shane
Blogs:
www.imagesbyshane.blogspot.com
Canon 20d and 40d
Canon 50mm 1.4
Canon 85mm 1.8
Canon 70-200L IS 2.8
still mucho pp but not as drastic effect-
difficult to deal with the skin-
big crop and brought up some flaws (particularly the yellow you can get on skin tones)-
did I read somewhere recently that it'll come with the shadows?-
is it an exposure problem? lighting problem?-
thanks for all comments and suggestions-
Anyway you cut it, the last image is a more "appropriate" rendition of such a beautiful lady. Before the prom - hmmm looking at your life line, I see a troubled future in store
My Photos
Thoughts on photographing a wedding, How to post a picture, AF Microadjustments?, Light Scoop
Equipment List - Check my profile
this is only the fourth (2nd girl) I've been through-
hah!-
I'll be 58 by the time she graduates!-
re color-
when I say yellow, this is a bit more than 'yellow'-
it's that kind of nasty color that I'm not so sure can be dealt with by hue/sat or color balance-
I find that something like this is exacerbated by photoshopping-
- Ansel Adams.
I've found I can fine-tune skintone problems much easier in LR by using minor white balance tweaks, along with the eight-channel HSL color sliders. I have tried to duplicate the same process in photoshop with inferior results. I hope i'm not coming off as condescending, you obviously have way more experience with Photoshop than me
50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.8, 24-70 2.8L, 35mm 1.4L, 135mm f2L
ST-E2 Transmitter + (3) 580 EXII + radio poppers
lynne-
re condescending-
good grief, no, I don't think that!-
in fact, as soon as I get the opportunity, I'm going to check it out-
re ps, enough to be dangerous-
thanks again!-
50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.8, 24-70 2.8L, 35mm 1.4L, 135mm f2L
ST-E2 Transmitter + (3) 580 EXII + radio poppers
no sweat, lynne-
already got it; just not using it to a great extent yet-
thanks again-
Nikon D300
Nikkor 85mm f/1.8D
Tamron 28-75 f/2.8
Nikkor 80-200 AF-D ED f/2.8
2 Alien Bees AB800
Nikon Speedlight SB800
Elinchrome Skyport Triggers
thanks much lex-