LPS#5 Escape At Dawn

douglas

Escape At Dawn

pyroPrints.com

I like it. I think if it was me I'd try and see if I can straighten it out (the non-visible horizon line) and crop it a bit to retain the diagonal line of the fence and i think the top left corner is a little dark.

my 2 cents.

douglas

pyroPrints.com wrote:

I like it. I think if it was me I'd try and see if I can straighten it out (the non-visible horizon line) and crop it a bit to retain the diagonal line of the fence and i think the top left corner is a little dark.

my 2 cents.

Thanks alot for feedback, Ill see if I can straiten it a bit without distorting to much.

pyroPrints.com

Check out this link, I find it very useful:
http://www.photocritic.org/2005/straightening-an-image-in-photoshop/

douglas

Thanks for link Pyro.

Here is another shot.

# 2

Nikolai

douglas wrote:

Escape At Dawn

Nice shot!

I agree with pyro, the tilt is wrong. The fence support poles should be vertical.
OTOH, you can increase the drame by making their tilt negative

Nikolai

douglas wrote:

Thanks for link Pyro.
Here is another shot.
# 2

Even cooler!

By any chance you can get the watch tower into the frame? Also, having the dogs on the other side of the fence could be a nice touch, too :-)

douglas

Nikolai wrote:

Even cooler!

By any chance you can get the watch tower into the frame? Also, having the dogs on the other side of the fence could be a nice touch, too :-)

Thanks for feedback, Nik. The water tower is miles away, would need to use 2 sepperate shots and merge, but that is an idea. I wish I had an orange pair of coveralls, I want to go back at night and see if I can find a good angle to put a spotlight shining on me from behind. Getting the right angle may not be possible though.
Dogs would be great!

Nikolai

douglas wrote:

The water tower

I said "watch" :-)
But yes, I think you can PS water tower into watch one rather easily

ChrisJ

2nd shot is a definate improvement! I wish there was a bit more head visible... but he is trying to be stealthy, after all.

douglas

Nikolai wrote:

I said "watch" :-)
But yes, I think you can PS water tower into watch one rather easily

Lol ok that makes more sense, I had water tower on the brain

douglas

ChrisJ wrote:

2nd shot is a definate improvement! I wish there was a bit more head visible... but he is trying to be stealthy, after all.

Thanks alot Chris, I agree with the more head visible, Ill try to keep that in mind in any reshoots.

pyroPrints.com

douglas wrote:

Thanks alot Chris, I agree with the more head visible, Ill try to keep that in mind in any reshoots.

Just try not to get shot =c)