Seneca, the blur you applied is too hard-edged. Work on a softer transition, using gradients or different opacities on your blur brush strokes. This is a bad effect as is, can be quite good if properly done
Thanks for the comments. Yes I thought the blur probably wouldn't work on this particular picture...I just thought I would try it out and try and get some feedback.
I decided to post it to see if I could get some other opinions...the C&C's always work especially if we want to grow as photographers. Thanks again!
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IMO his skin is a bit red in spots, and you might check that:
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I decided to post it to see if I could get some other opinions...the C&C's always work especially if we want to grow as photographers. Thanks again!
Composition, color, and saturation are great. Agree on the edge. Post the revision when you have it.
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