LPS#5 - Feedback / CC appreciated

Annie222Annie222 Registered Users Posts: 69 Big grins
edited May 6, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited May 4, 2007
    Honestly, can't say that I like this one, the subject is not big enough, the colors are weird. I dunno I think you can do better.
    pyroPrints.com (my little t-shirt shop)
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  • Annie222Annie222 Registered Users Posts: 69 Big grins
    edited May 4, 2007
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    I took this one as well. Was just playing around - I think I'll try something different just can't work out what . Thanks a
  • ChrisJChrisJ Registered Users Posts: 2,164 Major grins
    edited May 5, 2007
    I think I like the first composition better with the mouth and bubble in focus, but I want the target bubble to be bigger, and maybe a bit more lip showing (it's cut off to the right).

    The other problem is that the bubbles say "transparent" to me more than translucent... but a really strong image doesn't need as strong of a thematic connection.
    Chris
  • GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited May 5, 2007
    I think bubbles also say transparent more than tranlucent. There is a difference. Try thinking of something that lets light through, but you can't see a distinct visual image through. I get the dictionary out (or use wiktionary) for technical interpretations of the themes.

    Hope this helps,
    Emily
    Emily
    Psalm 62:5-6

  • Annie222Annie222 Registered Users Posts: 69 Big grins
    edited May 6, 2007
    Mum I need a haircut
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    What do you think ?
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