LPS#5 - Heeeeeelp!

pemmett

Are any of these interesting enough to enter? :dunno

Please help....

#1


#2


#3


#4



Thanks for all and any feedback ...

BistiArt

#2 v Its Bright Background

pemmett wrote:

Are any of these interesting enough to enter?
Thanks for all and any feedback ...

#2 shows promise...

Unfortunately, the bright background limits the forming perceptions of the face in shadow, a delicate feature. Was the raw shot showing highlights?

Would some burning be more appropriate?

pemmett

BistiArt wrote:

#2 shows promise...

Unfortunately, the bright background limits the forming perceptions of the face in shadow, a delicate feature. Was the raw shot showing highlights?

Would some burning be more appropriate?

Thanks for the feedback. Unfortunately the RAW file is also pretty bright where the sun was, so there's not a lot I can do - except shoot it again of course :-)

Cheers/peter

richtersl

Can you try brightening the background on #1? That would give a silhouette effect.

Or, try darkening the foreground of #2.

The other two don't really hit the mark for me.

pyroPrints.com

I think #1 is the only that qualifies for the theme

pemmett

richtersl wrote:

Can you try brightening the background on #1? That would give a silhouette effect.

Or, try darkening the foreground of #2.

The other two don't really hit the mark for me.

Linda/PyroPrints,

Thanks for the feedback. Do you think that these two work?

#1


#2

Tessa HD

lps#5
Out of these two, I prefer #2! What a sweet face!

Tessa

cabbey

pemmett wrote:

Do you think that these two work?

Both are gorgeous shots. I think I'd probably go for #1 myself, 'cause I just love the colors in it. Especially the glow that highlights her chin.

pyroPrints.com

pemmett wrote:

Linda/PyroPrints,

Thanks for the feedback. Do you think that these two work?

#1

#2

Both are gorgous shots. But #1 fits the theme better. Very nice!