Nice shot! I haven't tried much HDR myself, but I've defninitely been meaning to. Maybe this will be an inspiration!
Just a few things, all meant in a helpful way of course:)
1. Looking at the higher res version, it looks like some things aren't quite lined up, like the roofline and tower along the left side of the building. I'm assuming you were using a tripod, but maybe it got moved a little bit?
2. The people/snow/lights in the front are a little distracting, especially since the HDR layers make the people ghostlike. I'm guessing in downtown Toronto it's hard to get a shot off without them though:) Maybe a tighter shot to avoid some of the distractions and to bring out the hockey guy in the window above the door?
Again, I like the overall look and I'm going to have to go out and try one myself now!
2. The people/snow/lights in the front are a little distracting, especially since the HDR layers make the people ghostlike. I'm guessing in downtown Toronto it's hard to get a shot off without them though:) Maybe a tighter shot to avoid some of the distractions and to bring out the hockey guy in the window above the door?
This was one of my first HDRs. Unfortunately, I lost most of my earlier raw files because my hard drive failed So I cant re-edit them to remove the ghosting. I took this during my lunch break and this is located Downtown, Toronto.
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Nice shot! I haven't tried much HDR myself, but I've defninitely been meaning to. Maybe this will be an inspiration!
Just a few things, all meant in a helpful way of course:)
1. Looking at the higher res version, it looks like some things aren't quite lined up, like the roofline and tower along the left side of the building. I'm assuming you were using a tripod, but maybe it got moved a little bit?
2. The people/snow/lights in the front are a little distracting, especially since the HDR layers make the people ghostlike. I'm guessing in downtown Toronto it's hard to get a shot off without them though:) Maybe a tighter shot to avoid some of the distractions and to bring out the hockey guy in the window above the door?
Again, I like the overall look and I'm going to have to go out and try one myself now!
This was one of my first HDRs. Unfortunately, I lost most of my earlier raw files because my hard drive failed So I cant re-edit them to remove the ghosting. I took this during my lunch break and this is located Downtown, Toronto.
thanks for the critique!
I love those old Buildings
I can see the ghosting in the larger version too, least you can always shoot that again .
It still looks good, I like the colours too you did very well .
.... Skippy
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