LPS#5 Eternal Union

pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
edited May 11, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges
Ok 3rd time's a charm (I hope) Let me know what you think of these 2

#1
12sil.jpg
#2
34Sil.jpg

And here are some fun shots from the photoshoot =c)
http://www.divshare.com/download/613490-136 that's their boxer
http://www.divshare.com/download/613491-b53
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Which one? 9 votes

#1
22% 2 votes
#2
44% 4 votes
Both
33% 3 votes
Neither
0% 0 votes

Comments

  • quarkquark Registered Users Posts: 510 Major grins
    edited May 10, 2007
    Only an opinion but I think for #2 you should crop right below the shoulders. The impact of this one is the heads.
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  • eoren1eoren1 Registered Users Posts: 2,391 Major grins
    edited May 10, 2007
    Hey PyroPrints.
    Picked both - I like the girl's hair in #2 and the guy's expression in that one as well. The glowing red between them in #1 is awesome though! Any chance of a reshoot?
    E
  • indiegirlindiegirl Registered Users Posts: 930 Major grins
    edited May 10, 2007
    I like them! #2 is my favorite. I'd do a slightly tighter crop.
  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited May 10, 2007
    I voted #2
    There are minor things (I don't like the strap; the light is too bright/yellow at the bottom), but it's good overall... thumb.gif
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  • richterslrichtersl Registered Users Posts: 3,322 Major grins
    edited May 10, 2007
    My preference is #1. I really like that subtle shade of red that's between the couple.
  • tleetlee Registered Users Posts: 1,090 Major grins
    edited May 10, 2007
    #2--I agree, a tighter crop might be better

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  • Tessa HDTessa HD Registered Users Posts: 852 Major grins
    edited May 11, 2007
    I agree with E
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited May 11, 2007
    I think this is my final version. Cleaned up some distractions. I didn't want to crop it too tight, I wanna have some room for them to stand out.

    Thanks so much for all your advice =c) (if you have more I always wanna hear it)
    34Sil_FIX.jpg
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  • NikolaiNikolai Registered Users Posts: 19,035 Major grins
    edited May 11, 2007
    I think this is my final version. Cleaned up some distractions. I didn't want to crop it too tight, I wanna have some room for them to stand out.

    Thanks so much for all your advice =c) (if you have more I always wanna hear it)

    Nice cleanup! thumb.gif
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  • sherstonesherstone Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 2,356 Major grins
    edited May 11, 2007
    #2 and the resulting clean up - works for me
    Very nice.
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