Can this pass for "Translucent"?

richtersl

So here I am getting ready to update my site when I come across this photo I had taken over the weekend. To me it looks like it can convey "translucent" but I'm not sure if it gives a strong enough message. Help! :help :scratch




This is my current entry:

eoren1

Hi Linda,
I like the submitted one much better. The new one does show translucency but your eye sort of has to hunt for it if that makes any sense.
E

saurora

I would definitely stick with the silhouettes. That's a cool shot!

tlee

Stick with the original--I really like it!

indiegirl

original. hands down.

Nikolai

Stay with the silhouette!

Tessa HD

lps#5
Though I love your landscape, I pick your original entry for the challenge.

Tessa

richtersl

Thanks for all the feedback!
I guess I'll stick with the original, then!