Still working on landscapes hows this one

dragon300zxdragon300zx Registered Users Posts: 2,575 Major grins
edited February 7, 2005 in Wildlife
What do you think of this one? Was trying some out of the ordinary stuff. What do you think of this?

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A little more traditional maybe.

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  • dragon300zxdragon300zx Registered Users Posts: 2,575 Major grins
    edited February 7, 2005
    Hmm no comments. Are the shots really that horrible? ne_nau.gif
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  • GREAPERGREAPER Registered Users Posts: 3,113 Major grins
    edited February 7, 2005
    No, they are not. I meant to comment yesterday, but didn't (dont tell anyone, but I fell asleep in my chair)

    I like the first one, though I think it could use a bit of a contrast boost. I tried it and it really pops. A nice abstract architectural shot. Nice repeating lines, great depth of feild. Not bad at all.

    The second one doesn't do much for me. It looks pretty flat contrast wise, the trees and poles etc on the sides are a bit messy and cluttered and the straight line back would be more interesting if it curved, or you could see the lines converging better or something. It just leaves me a bit flat.

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  • fishfish Registered Users Posts: 2,950 Major grins
    edited February 7, 2005
    Dragon, I like the compositions...the pattern in the first one is nice. I'd like to see more contrast in them tho. Both shots seem to be fairly 18% gray. But that's just me...I'm a black and white kinda guy. :lol
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