This is Tallen..

zoomer

My last pics the a comment was made that the light looked a little flat.
Do these look better?

Scott_Quier

These are like Night 'n Day different and sooooo much better. clap

Very well done, indeed. I especially like the first one! Both the light and her expression are much better in #1 as compared to #2. I think, maybe, you hit a home run with these!

P.S. In #2, check out the shadow from her right arm. This can be corrected/eliminated if the flash is above the center of the lens when you rotate the camera to portrait orientation. Some people, myself included, use flash brackets to keep the flash above the lens. Others use off-camera flash (I'm just not there yet - in time).

mmroden

That first one is _spectacular_-- very hard to call that one flat.

The second one is ok, but in light of the first one, it just doesn't compare, I think.

CookieS

First one is nice, love the pose, second looks over processed and the eyes look fake.

saurora

The first one is really nice, very flattering and great lighting, pose, etc. The 2nd one her expression looks 'forced', lighting is not quite as good, background is not as pretty, her eyes look like they are closing. So....number 1 is the clear winner of the 2 and she should be very pleased with this one!

System

both really nice pics-

I'm with everybody else re the first one being a great shot-