Your thoughts?

thejumpmaster68

I would love your C and C on this set. It is my first attempt at a photo shoot. This is what I think is my best stuff, but I'm sure ya'll can give me tips to make it better. Thanks for helping me learn.

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System

well, no expert at this-

but I like all of them-

she looks a little stiff in the first pic but she looks very natural in the rest of them-

would like to see a little pop in the pics, kind of like you've got in the last one-

couple of suggestions-

try davidto's tute on 'popping' the pics in the tutorial section-

also, try andy's bw conversion tute (not that there's anything wrong with yours)-

I guess I like the last one the best; the blurred bg or 'bokeh' works for me and your pp is good-

re pose, I like the third one best; not sure why-


if you really like one quite a bit, and think it needs some work, post it on the whipping post; can't hurt; if it's constructive criticism, you're that much further ahead; if it's not, then it's not worth paying any attention to-

thejumpmaster68

Thanks for the feedback. I'm learning everyday trying to figure out all there is to know.

Will

gefillmore wrote:

well, no expert at this-

but I like all of them-

she looks a little stiff in the first pic but she looks very natural in the rest of them-

would like to see a little pop in the pics, kind of like you've got in the last one-

couple of suggestions-

try davidto's tute on 'popping' the pics in the tutorial section-

also, try andy's bw conversion tute (not that there's anything wrong with yours)-

I guess I like the last one the best; the blurred bg or 'bokeh' works for me and your pp is good-

re pose, I like the third one best; not sure why-


if you really like one quite a bit, and think it needs some work, post it on the whipping post; can't hurt; if it's constructive criticism, you're that much further ahead; if it's not, then it's not worth paying any attention to-

DaveK

I am still learing as well so not much to give in the way of critique beyond what George has already shared other than to say I think you did a great job for your first photo shoot. Your camera position and posing of the model are well done and give a good variety. You should be very pleased.

evoryware

I'm fond of 1 & 6. I think they are begging for more color though. Nice set!

Seneca

I think color and composition look great. good job!