self portrait

tintingoldatintingolda Registered Users Posts: 2 Beginner grinner
edited February 8, 2005 in People
new at this. what do you think?

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  • AllenAllen Registered Users Posts: 10,013 Major grins
    edited February 7, 2005
    tintingolda wrote:
    new at this. what do you think?
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  • Steve CaviglianoSteve Cavigliano Super Moderators Posts: 3,599 moderator
    edited February 7, 2005
    I like the pose, like the look on your face and the exposure looks to be very good. The busy background kind of takes the eyes away from your eyes and hair. Two of the nicest parts of the pic, IMO.


    It is sort of unique though and sort of a fun idea. I dunno, maybe a little tighter on yourself and blur that background a little?

    Just my opinion,
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  • DBotDBot Registered Users Posts: 34 Big grins
    edited February 7, 2005
    Looks good, however I would have used a little less headroom
  • MitchellMitchell Registered Users Posts: 3,503 Major grins
    edited February 8, 2005
    I agree with the suggestion about recomposition. The shot would be more interesting if it was cropped so that your eyes were in the upper 1/2 to 1/3 of the picture.


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