SF1 - proposal and feedback

ultravoxultravox Registered Users Posts: 776 Major grins
edited May 24, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges
Like to hear you're opinions about this one. I might go for another but until then...
Tks.
Cristian.
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  • pyroPrints.compyroPrints.com Registered Users Posts: 1,383 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2007
    ultravox wrote:
    Like to hear you're opinions about this one. I might go for another but until then...
    Tks.

    It's very interesting
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  • pemmettpemmett Registered Users Posts: 507 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2007
    Nice peaceful image, but it does have a lot of black space at the top.
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  • RobertRobert Registered Users Posts: 148 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2007
    Interesting, but it says ‘unbalanced’ to me in every way I look at it.
    Robert
  • VisualXpressionsVisualXpressions Registered Users Posts: 860 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2007
    I don't like it all that much... I agree it has to much black space, and is unballanced... I don't think it will be a good contest contender...ne_nau.gif

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  • GreensquaredGreensquared Registered Users Posts: 2,115 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2007
    Of course it's unbalanced, but that's the point, right? I LOVE the textures. Would like to see the tops of the eggs, however and perhaps placing them closer together. Somehow there is an element missing though. Nice work, but keep trying!

    Best of luck!
    Emily
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  • richterslrichtersl Registered Users Posts: 3,322 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2007
    Robert wrote:
    Interesting, but it says ‘unbalanced’ to me in every way I look at it.
    15524779-Ti.gif

    I'd try reshooting it with less shadow on the eggs and placing them in different positions. Maybe even try a shot with more than two eggs??
    Linda

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  • ChrisJChrisJ Registered Users Posts: 2,164 Major grins
    edited May 24, 2007
    Not really working for me... it's just not very photographically interesting. Change the angle to make it a bit more three-dimensional? It just seems a bit flat.
    Chris
  • annnna8888annnna8888 Registered Users, Super Moderators Posts: 936 SmugMug Employee
    edited May 24, 2007
    To me, it seems a nice photo, but not something I'd enter. The idea is interesting enough, but needs work and different approaches. Or try something completely different. :D

    Ana
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