My LPS#6 entry addendum
fashiznitsngrins
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Instead of hanging up the ol’ camera bag and calling it quits (just yet) I have decided instead to try to lighten up and begin the next round of challenges with a personal challenge within the Challenges. The challenge of mine is to make Shay laugh.
So, instead of yearning and longing for the ultimate Shay approval like:
I am looking for something like:
13 – fashiznitsngrins – Nude-le Indulgence
Visually it lacks everything. A 40:1 vertical and horizontal crop would help some, but not much. Feels like you are on the wrong side of the shot and need to be on the other side, but it won’t matter, because it’s still wouldn’t work for me. I find the shadow of the noodle across her forehead distracts away from the overall message. But it did make me laugh!
And as a side note: I am not poking fun at Shay, because as much as they may hurt (like an open, gaping wound), his criticisms are accurate and therefore I am only making fun of myself and my shortcomings (of which I have an abundance).
Good luck to all!
Shay Stephens wrote:
30 - sherstone - "Rail Meat"
Lean! hahaha I like to laugh and this let me do that
So, instead of yearning and longing for the ultimate Shay approval like:
Shay Stephens wrote:
6 - seastack - Edge of Tides
Sweet mercy! :bow I am in awe!
Or
14 - vandana - "Soaring high"
Sweet mercy! :bow Wow!
Or
33 - Greensquared - Soil Sample
Slam dunk! The top of my top 10. Brilliant!
I am looking for something like:
13 – fashiznitsngrins – Nude-le Indulgence
Visually it lacks everything. A 40:1 vertical and horizontal crop would help some, but not much. Feels like you are on the wrong side of the shot and need to be on the other side, but it won’t matter, because it’s still wouldn’t work for me. I find the shadow of the noodle across her forehead distracts away from the overall message. But it did make me laugh!
And as a side note: I am not poking fun at Shay, because as much as they may hurt (like an open, gaping wound), his criticisms are accurate and therefore I am only making fun of myself and my shortcomings (of which I have an abundance).
Good luck to all!
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you made ME laugh.
Tessa:D
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Emily
Bet you will get lots of smiles! You have certainly captured curvy!
Maureen
Thanks for all of the replies. I started the day off nearly in tears and now I'm all smiles. I made myself laugh when I thought this up - now it's just nice to know that I have put a smile on others' faces too!!
Aaron Newman
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You made my day! :cool
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Winston
Just look at her expression - she doesn't care!!!
:D:D:D:D
But, I don't think the picture has a "winning quality" to it. I know it was probably difficult to arrange all the noodles the way you wanted them but aside from that it just looks like a snapshot. Just doesn't have the composition.
Erich
Thanks for the input Erich. Do you think if I added the seasoning packet to the noodles, that would add the necessary "missing ingredient"?