Oops!

NanaMo

After reading the comments about the bridge....thought I would post this to see *your* reaction. :bow:bow

I had to take it at this angle for 2 reasons. 1. the reflection did not show at any other and 2. that pesky construction fence got in my way. :rofl:rofl

CC most welcome.

Tessa HD

i really like the angles of the windows, the angles in the reflections. however i think there might be too much other information. would a crop work to highlight only those elements?

Tessa

NanaMo

Thanks Tessa....
....is this along the lines you were thinking?

sunione

Nice angular composition. Suggest that you use the clone tool on that white blob in the upper sky.

photogmomma

sunione wrote:

Nice angular composition. Suggest that you use the clone tool on that white blob in the upper sky.

Also, try boosting the contrast and that might pop the angles even more!

richtersl

photogmomma wrote:

Also, try boosting the contrast and that might pop the angles even more!

Nikolai

I like the new tighter crop, but I think that white object (the moon, a cloud or whatever it is) is a distraction that does not need to be there. Clone or crop should take care of it.

HTH

Tessa HD

Yeah, that's better. I might even go farther - but please don't take my word for it. The other commenters have good suggestions too.

Tessa

NanaMo

Thanks everyone! I reposted the picture with the suggestions......

...will continue working on #6!

Maureen

richtersl

I just checked out your final result in the competition thread and it looks nice! Whatever you did made the reflection pop and its angles juxtaposed over the angles of the building is really cool!!

Good luck to you!!!