Neat Nik! I love the way the pencils are set up and the shadow they cast. I have two problems with it though. First, the background is really blahhh and detracts rather than enhances the impact for me. Fix that and this is a photo I could almost love.
But, for the challenge, I am asking myself whether this is angles or curves. I get a curvy feeling from it but the angles are quite emphatic too. This duality might be a problem for the judges. On balance I like the guitar idea better for LPS#6.
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I like it alot including the background, but not sure it would fare well in contest. I think the effect of the processing would come down to personal taste for the judges, so its hard to say. I do think it would look kool hanging on the wall though.
I like it alot including the background, but not sure it would fare well in contest. I think the effect of the processing would come down to personal taste for the judges, so its hard to say. I do think it would look kool hanging on the wall though.
Thanks!
I agree that it's probably gonna be too much of a hit or miss.
Need to work on something more solid. Luckily, I have a couple more ideas (plus "the human forms" entry is still an option:-).
Cheers!
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This seems to be lacking something but I'm not sure what Maybe a good connection to the theme? Sorry to have to say that
I prefer the guitar theme. Cheers/Peter
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But, for the challenge, I am asking myself whether this is angles or curves. I get a curvy feeling from it but the angles are quite emphatic too. This duality might be a problem for the judges. On balance I like the guitar idea better for LPS#6.
Virginia
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curvey model...this is a cool shot but not a contender yet. Just being honest
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Thanks!
I agree that it's probably gonna be too much of a hit or miss.
Need to work on something more solid. Luckily, I have a couple more ideas (plus "the human forms" entry is still an option:-).
Cheers!
I think you need to revisit Spanish Guitar idea you had for LPS #4.
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Tessa,
let him know that the 30x40 canvas print can be ordered then (and you can get him lps/dgrin discount, so you score on this, too)
Hmmm, maybe a Boss' Day gift?
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I actually had to go onto the internet to look up what a Ticonderoga was When I found out, I kicked myself when I saw it was written on the pencils
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Too funny!
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