You've posed the bride and her gown very nicely. The groom looks a little uncomfortable/unsure about the photo experience. The composition of the shot is pretty good, though the tree truck is something of a distraction.
This is a tough shot from a lighting perspective. Her gown just shimmers and shines and is, thus, blown in a number of areas while the groom's tux appears plugged a bit.
Something about the background seems a little strange; the tree and the far background appear to be OOF to the same degree, resulting in an appearance that the B&G have been pasted into the scene. This look is further "supported" by the difference in light levels between the B&G and all of the background (even the tree that the groom appears to be leaning against).
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This is a tough shot from a lighting perspective. Her gown just shimmers and shines and is, thus, blown in a number of areas while the groom's tux appears plugged a bit.
Something about the background seems a little strange; the tree and the far background appear to be OOF to the same degree, resulting in an appearance that the B&G have been pasted into the scene. This look is further "supported" by the difference in light levels between the B&G and all of the background (even the tree that the groom appears to be leaning against).
I would love to see the original.
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