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indiegirl

Hey groovers. You got an opinion on this stuff? Lay it on me. I'm going for angular and can reshoot if necessary.

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Greensquared

Hi Jesse,

I like the colors in the last one and it does have angles, even if they are soft. Seems out of focus though. Work it a little more and I think you could have something really nice.

Emily

sunita

I agree with Emily. The last one with some tweaking should turn out well.

Welcome back!

Sunita

dlscott56

Jesse,

Imo 1 and 3 could have some potential as a good subject for the challenge but need to be reshot. Maybe some better lighting or different dof.

richtersl

sunita wrote:

I agree with Emily. The last one with some tweaking should turn out well.

Welcome back!

Sunita

indiegirl

Reshoot! I'm reshooting!

Do you like my yarn colors? That will be my sweater this winter.

Art Scott

#3 with a bit tighter crop of the oof background....starting at the bright bluse horizontal going to top the 3rd horizontal is where I would crop (incamera) too, I do not think you need all of the other oof going out of the photo....remember yoiu did not pay for this opinon...so take it for what it cost ya

indiegirl

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Greensquared

I think I prefer #4, for the color and detail, but would crop the distracting lights to the right.

Best of luck (the sweater should be very nice too!).

Emily

indiegirl

Ug. I'm not feeling the yarn love. I can't figure out why this isn't working for me. Humph.

Jesse

photogmomma

I actually like #2 in the reshoot (which is really #1 in the photos, which I dont' get, but I'm tired)....

I like the angles and i love the colors. Can you pop the colors/contrast more to make the angles pop more?

Hope your daugher is doing better - home even? I've been gone so I haven't checked your site or your other post. She's precious!

urbanaries

photogmomma wrote:

I actually like #2 in the reshoot (which is really #1 in the photos, which I dont' get, but I'm tired)....

I agree w/ Andi....love the #2 (as labeled) in the reshoot most of all. good luck~!

sherstone

#2 in the reshoot - appeals to me most, just remember I'm a close up detail kind of guy too though.