#32 Does this Quailfy

bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
edited February 16, 2005 in The Dgrin Challenges
Your comments and Sugestions most welcome.
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  • digital faeriedigital faerie Registered Users Posts: 667 Major grins
    edited February 13, 2005
    bfjr wrote:
    Your comments and Sugestions most welcome.
    I believe this would qualify, looks like more than half of the photo is composed of the orange glow....and the framing of the wall isn't distracting from that color. It's a simple subject that's shot pretty well imo. :)
  • snapapplesnapapple Registered Users Posts: 2,093 Major grins
    edited February 14, 2005
    bfjr wrote:
    Your comments and Sugestions most welcome.
    15768691-M.jpg

    I think this qualifies, but it doesn't grab me. It needs more interest. Like maybe if there was some golden light on the stucco wall. It's also too centered. The window is in the center of the picture and the seam that separates the two windows is in the center of the glass area. It needs a stronger "rule of thirds" balance. Maybe it could be shot at a diagonal angle. Good effort. Keep trying.
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  • bfjrbfjr Registered Users Posts: 10,980 Major grins
    edited February 15, 2005
    Thank you both for your comments, and I mostly agree. I was going to work with this image a bit but the rules say no post PP. I think really what it needs is a human shilotte (spelling, my bad) :): . Yes, most definitly keep trying.

    Thanks again
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  • lynnmalynnma Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 5,208 Major grins
    edited February 16, 2005
    A human siloette (I can't spell either) would be wonderful here.. hope you can reshoot.:D
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