Help! I heard you guys were brutally honest!
babylemke
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I'd like some feedback on my photos... I'll take anything you've got! I'd like to know what would make these pix better, and ultimately, which one I should enter in the Joy/Sorrow contest.
I'm a beginner photographer that - knowing the next contest was "sorrow" - was smart enough to bring my camera to my son's well baby appointment because I knew he'd be getting shots! How horrible is THAT? Please - no "bad mommy" comments! :nono I already feel sheepish enough!:rolleyes
Thanks in advance for your feedback!:bow
I'm a beginner photographer that - knowing the next contest was "sorrow" - was smart enough to bring my camera to my son's well baby appointment because I knew he'd be getting shots! How horrible is THAT? Please - no "bad mommy" comments! :nono I already feel sheepish enough!:rolleyes
Thanks in advance for your feedback!:bow
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I like the first one best, it does a nice job of showing the environment. I would crop the left to the wire on the instrument holder and crop off half the empty space on the right. I think it's also important to use the entire 800 pixels allowed on the long dimension of your entry.
Maybe you could recover some highlights?
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I like the emotion expressed in #2, but I like the length/crop of #1 also it gives the viewer more visual to the tell.
I would say try b/w, the tone here almosts has hues of purplish/red (but then I'm on my crappy monitor in my office...grrrr)
Good luck in whichever you choose...
Donna
The lollipop in #3 means so much more because we saw #1 & #2. We also have a better idea of what is going on in #2 & #3 because we've seen the medical equipment on the wall in #1. We might be able to guess in #2 & #3 that these are taking place in a doctor's office, but having #1 certainly helped. If I had to pick one - I'd say #1.
(BTW kudos for taking your camera, hope he feels better)