Sumer Rain!

DLutz

I had the opportunity to work with Raven today and she was more than a good sport... she said the water was cold but it was 94F today

Let me know what you think?
--Thanks

ShepsMom

I love the 1st shot
2nd, i don't know, there is something about it, may be girl's expression?

gpphotos

i like the way the rain is bouncing off her hood. neat effect

dogwood

The first shot is okay, the second shot I think you need to shoot from a higher vantage point to get a more flattering angle-- esp. on her chin. Also, I'd suggest having her eyes shifted a little more towards the camera-- but still looking off cam like you already have.

midnitejam

The first shot is a great portrait. The pose and the expression work very well for the model.

The second shot -- not so much. The angle you've chosen doesn't flatter the model's facial features as well as the first shot. Probably should have been shown separately.