New clothing project I am working on and this was from our first outing. I like the shot, but I am not sure I am 100% happy with my PP work. Comments on how to make it better?
It looks a little dark and she could use a little fill on her face. What exactly is the shot for? The jeans and top? If so you need to focus on those more, to me the bike grabs a lot of attention because of all the logos on it. Do you have any without her feet cut off?
It looks a little dark and she could use a little fill on her face. What exactly is the shot for? The jeans and top? If so you need to focus on those more, to me the bike grabs a lot of attention because of all the logos on it. Do you have any without her feet cut off?
The clothing company is Allied their logo is on the bike twice even though it looks like a letter "Q" on the side fairing and bellypan. Their idea was to have the race bike with the logos on it and get some PG-13 ish type of stuff and give out the print(s) at the sportbike show this weekend with the grils on hand to sign them.
Not my idea, I would have at least put them in a shirt or something that said Allied on it.
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I like it. But it looks more like pr. for 'Studio 819'. You have the angles and lighting spot on, very nice. I do think that the girl should be astride the bike or maybe use a little photshop work to tone down the bike a bit.
I think that I know what you are trying to achieve and overall you have done a great job.
Aloha
Regarding the un-buttoned Jeans.............a very nice touch; we all know that its the girl with the most sex appeal that leads the eye to the product!
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Not my idea, I would have at least put them in a shirt or something that said Allied on it.
And the pic needs to be a bit brighter, and some fill in the face.
And I think I might be seeing a green cast to it all???
I like the angles, though.
VI
I really don't care for unzipped pants, what does it supposed to represent?
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I like it. But it looks more like pr. for 'Studio 819'. You have the angles and lighting spot on, very nice. I do think that the girl should be astride the bike or maybe use a little photshop work to tone down the bike a bit.
I think that I know what you are trying to achieve and overall you have done a great job.
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Regarding the un-buttoned Jeans
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