Rachel

ShepsMom

Rachel is a friend of my step-son and is 17. She is very sweet girl. I decided to take few shots of her. Of course, all these and more going to end up on "myspace" :rolleyes



Pictures look kind of light on my screen, i don't know what am i doing wrong here. :scratch








Rachel and John

~Jan~

The one of the two of them is very sweet!!

ShepsMom

Thank you Jan for taking a pick!

h4rri

I'd agree, the last one is a great shot and one for the family album. I found the composition of the first two a little distracting but still technically good photos.

ShepsMom

Thank you h4, did you find background to be somewhat distracting, or my crop job didn't work? lol

h4rri

ShepsMom wrote:

Thank you h4, did you find background to be somewhat distracting, or my crop job didn't work? lol

It was more the crop but it's all down to personal opinion, they are great shots and really show the model well. I guess I'm just a non-crop kind of guy so please take no offence from my comment.

ShepsMom

Absolutely no offence taken I appreciate everyone's opinion, some might be very useful! Thanks again!

jeffreaux2

I agree on third shot.....very nice. The composition and crop on the others looks fine to me also, however what bothers me is that it looks like the eyes arent in focus in either one. At least they don't appear to be the sharpest area of the photos.

ShepsMom

Thanks Jeff for your comment. I agree, i found all three pics to be somewhat very soft in focus. My fault, i need to pay attention and stop wiggling

jeffreaux2

ShepsMom wrote:

Thanks Jeff for your comment. I agree, i found all three pics to be somewhat very soft in focus. My fault, i need to pay attention and stop wiggling

I use a monopod. It helps stabalize the camera, and gives you a good plant at your feet to maintain your distance.

m_granite

Nice shots. Great face. Not that you cant put these on myspace. They look great.

ShepsMom

, Thanks, i wont be putting them on "myspace", i'm sure kids will