My beautiful best friend ;)

ShannonHeat

This is a pic of my beautiful best friend, Kellie. As always, c/c is welcomed and encouraged.

~Jan~

She's stunning! I would like to see her a bit farther away from the rocks; otherwise, nice capture!

Scott_Quier

Your friend is stunning and, like Jan, I would like to see some seperation between her and the rocks.

Now for some C&C
It appears that the camera was quite close to her and that you were using a short focal length. This has resulted in a large head with a long face on a small body. To keep the pose but correct the perspective issues, just use a longer focal length from a greater distace.

dogwood

Scott_Quier wrote:

I would like to see some seperation between her and the rocks.

Now for some C&C
It appears that the camera was quite close to her and that you were using a short focal length. This has resulted in a large head with a long face on a small body. To keep the pose but correct the perspective issues, just use a longer focal length from a greater distace.

Yup, I agree with Scott. And no one has stated the obvious-- the viewer's eye is drawn down her face and right into her shirt. There's even a speck of white there (white draws the eye when everything surrounding it is dark) and her light colored arms seem to draw the eye downward and away from her face too.

ShannonHeat

Haha, I know, I tried to fix the white, but it wasn't happening. This is only one of may I took that day. I'll post more.

WildWally

Yes , she is pretty !!
Nice shot , but I agree with the others .
Is she from Texas also ???? I need to move down there !!!!

ShannonHeat

Yes, y'all, we're all from deep in the heart of Texas....lol.

WildWally wrote:

Yes , she is pretty !!
Nice shot , but I agree with the others .
Is she from Texas also ???? I need to move down there !!!!

Seneca

Love the shot.