Still Trying...

Sir HawkinsSir Hawkins Registered Users Posts: 37 Big grins
edited July 13, 2007 in Holy Macro
Just want to know if this is a ok shot and what can i do to make it better ??

Or just what you thing
IM new so if you bet be up thats ok to LOL
IMG_0621.jpg
  • File size: 335952 bytes
  • File date: 2007:07:11 21:58:01
  • Camera make: Canon
  • Camera model: Canon PowerShot S3 IS
  • Date/Time: 2007:07:10 11:18:36
  • Resolution: 800 x 600
  • Orientation: rotate 90
  • Flash used: No
  • Focal length: 6.0mm (35mm equivalent: 38mm)
  • CCD width: 5.72mm
  • Exposure time: 0.020 s (1/50)
  • Aperture: f/8.0
  • Whitebalance: Auto
  • Metering Mode: matrix
  • Exposure Mode: Auto bracketing
IMG_0465.jpg
File size: 173869 bytes
File date: 2007:07:11 21:51:54
Camera make: Canon
Camera model: Canon PowerShot S3 IS
Date/Time: 2007:07:06 17:51:38
Resolution: 800 x 600
Flash used: No
Focal length: 62.3mm (35mm equivalent: 392mm)
CCD width: 5.72mm
Exposure time: 0.0100 s (1/100)
Aperture: f/3.5
Whitebalance: Auto
Metering Mode: matrix
Exposure Mode: Auto bracketing

IMG_0598.jpg
  • File size: 97122 bytes
  • File date: 2007:07:11 21:54:02
  • Camera make: Canon
  • Camera model: Canon PowerShot S3 IS
  • Date/Time: 2007:07:10 10:53:16
  • Resolution: 800 x 600
  • Flash used: No
  • Focal length: 6.0mm (35mm equivalent: 38mm)
  • CCD width: 5.72mm
  • Exposure time: 0.0031 s (1/320)
  • Aperture: f/2.7
  • Whitebalance: Manual
  • Metering Mode: matrix
  • Exposure Mode: Auto bracketing
thank you for all the help
kelly

Comments

  • SkippySkippy Registered Users Posts: 12,075 Major grins
    edited July 12, 2007
    Just want to know if this is a ok shot and what can i do to make it better ??

    Or just what you thing
    IM new so if you bet be up thats ok to Laughing.gif

    thank you for all the help
    kelly

    Hi Kelly, welcome to the Forum clap.gif

    I like that first shot, at first I thought it was a tennis ball that had been cut, the shadow made me look closer to see it is in fact a broken egg shell.

    This is like talking to myself here (forgive me)
    Centering doesn't always work (am I saying this?? me the Queen of centering eek7.gif )

    Image #2 I love to bits I do I do iloveyou.gif that is one neat Frog Shot girl clap.gif
    Nice and sharp, makes you wonder what it might be looking at the way he is facing.

    Image #3 ... when shooting bugs, go for the EYES IN FOCUS
    The background on this one is also distracting.

    Over all you did very nicely thumb.gif you have a good eye,
    need some work on composition (many of us do too nod.gif )

    Keep Posting Kelly and Well Done :D .... Skippy
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  • polartownjunkiepolartownjunkie Registered Users Posts: 182 Major grins
    edited July 12, 2007
    the first takes my cake, perhaps at another angle it'd be further shattering

    i like the green scheme with your frog, though centering drys it up for me a bit, though i understand frogs can be slippery subjects

    next time come up through the water in scuba approach perhaps
    since the origin of matter is matter
    shiny new thoughts are recycled clatter



    down to my cell phone shooter,
    anyone have a decent early SD card digtal for grabs?


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  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited July 12, 2007
    Agree with skippy
    i like frog most
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  • Lord VetinariLord Vetinari Registered Users Posts: 15,901 Major grins
    edited July 13, 2007
    Good shots - like the egg and frog :)
    The damsel fly is not so good- too centred and the pose/angle is not so good- normally with bugs you need to get their eyes in focus and take them off centre by giving them more room in the direction they are looking.
    Excellent start and first post :)

    Brian V.
  • leaforteleaforte Registered Users Posts: 1,948 Major grins
    edited July 13, 2007
    The shadow of the root on the eggshell is a nice touch to the composition. And who doesn't just adore a fun shot of a frog. They say Frogs and Fungi are environmental monitors, so keep an eye (or a lens) on them! Thanks for sharing.
    Growing with Dgrin



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