It's a beautiful picture, and your daughter is lovely.
I think the large amount of highlights in the hair is distracting the viewer from the subject's face. I think moving the hair light more behind the subject -- converting it to a rim light -- might be worth a try. It'll still create highlights in the hair, but it won't compete so much with the subject's face.
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I think it's a nice pose and you have a very pretty daughter-
I like the conversion; just having trouble with what looks like glare on the left side of her face-
It's a beautiful picture, and your daughter is lovely.
I think the large amount of highlights in the hair is distracting the viewer from the subject's face. I think moving the hair light more behind the subject -- converting it to a rim light -- might be worth a try. It'll still create highlights in the hair, but it won't compete so much with the subject's face.
Regards,
Wes