Well the shots are shot very nicely with nice lighting and good exposure but the composition is not very interesting.
Some suggested shots just off looking at these-
In the first shot- move a little to the left- shoot a vertical shot with the tree as the rt border and the mill as the left. The mill looks to have some interesting features with the wheel- chute to the rt of the mill- and the little bridge. Use these to your advantage next time.
In the second shot- same thing - get much closer and focus on the interesting porch with its old railings and steps and their contrast to the uniform brick work of the chimney.
The photos are a little soft as far as detail and sharpness. This could be from the settings you shot at but you can work on that in post proces too.
Hope that helps- look forward to seeing more shots from you.
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Well the shots are shot very nicely with nice lighting and good exposure but the composition is not very interesting.
Some suggested shots just off looking at these-
In the first shot- move a little to the left- shoot a vertical shot with the tree as the rt border and the mill as the left. The mill looks to have some interesting features with the wheel- chute to the rt of the mill- and the little bridge. Use these to your advantage next time.
In the second shot- same thing - get much closer and focus on the interesting porch with its old railings and steps and their contrast to the uniform brick work of the chimney.
The photos are a little soft as far as detail and sharpness. This could be from the settings you shot at but you can work on that in post proces too.
Hope that helps- look forward to seeing more shots from you.
Thanks for the comments I will play with the sharpness this eveing and repost them and see what you think
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Some suggested shots just off looking at these-
In the first shot- move a little to the left- shoot a vertical shot with the tree as the rt border and the mill as the left. The mill looks to have some interesting features with the wheel- chute to the rt of the mill- and the little bridge. Use these to your advantage next time.
In the second shot- same thing - get much closer and focus on the interesting porch with its old railings and steps and their contrast to the uniform brick work of the chimney.
The photos are a little soft as far as detail and sharpness. This could be from the settings you shot at but you can work on that in post proces too.
Hope that helps- look forward to seeing more shots from you.
Aaron Newman
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Thanks for the comments I will play with the sharpness this eveing and repost them and see what you think
http://bavasshokie.smugmug.com