Late afternoon shots

DanteDante Registered Users Posts: 109 Major grins
edited July 29, 2007 in People
I don't take too many people shots, but lately I've been more interested and I'm trying my hand at a few.

I ordered a Canon EF 50mm f1.4 from B&H last night to practice with...and I'll eventually have to buy a flash and diffuser. I'll be posting soon in the accesories section for advice and suggestions on equipment to buy.

These were taken with an EF 70-200mm 2.8L IS.


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-Troy (Dante)
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  • ~Jan~~Jan~ Registered Users Posts: 966 Major grins
    edited July 27, 2007
    I think the first one is way too shadowy, but the other ones are nice. #2 is my favorite.
  • pyrtekpyrtek Registered Users Posts: 539 Major grins
    edited July 27, 2007
    You chose very difficult lighting conditions for your first attempt at portraits.
    I think you did very well, considering those conditions, except, perhaps, on
    the first picture, in which half of the lady's on the left face is completely blown
    out. Having them face away from the sun and adding some fill flash would have
    made for a much more pleasant image. I like the other ones very much, but I
    think they, too, would have benefited from better lighting. Next time try later
    or earlier in the day when the light isn't so harsh. Or even try a session on
    an overcast day, instead of a sunny one.
  • wesleytwesleyt Registered Users Posts: 112 Major grins
    edited July 27, 2007
    Dante,

    I love #2, 3, and 4. It looks like you needed to diffuse the light in #1 a bit to keep the cheek from blowing out.

    I'm going back and forth on the out-of-focus greenery in the foreground on #3; I think it's okay as is. I love the pose.

    I lover the hair highlights in 4. Wow!

    Beautiful shots!

    - Wes
  • evorywareevoryware Registered Users Posts: 1,330 Major grins
    edited July 27, 2007
    2 and 4 it appears the magazine is reflecting light back into her face.
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  • saurorasaurora Registered Users Posts: 4,320 Major grins
    edited July 27, 2007
    I like 2,3 and 4 very well. I agree pretty much with what's been said. Using a magazine works well as a substitute reflector adding light to the face. I do like the OOF plants and flowers in shot #3 (my fav of the bunch) as it adds to her somewhat mysterious glance. Great start!!! Look forward to seeing what you can do with the 50 f/1.4. thumb.gif
  • Wet OregonWet Oregon Registered Users Posts: 14 Big grins
    edited July 27, 2007
    Late afternoon shots
    I too prefer #3---except I feel it would be improved 110% if you cropped quite a bit of the branches off on the right side of photo; then your full attention would go directly to the young lady's face--and not be drawn to the very harsh-lit scrub brush..I'm just starting within Digital Grin and I hope is it #3---no book is involved if that helps.
  • DanteDante Registered Users Posts: 109 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2007
    Thank you all for your input, it's very appreciated! thumb.gif

    I posted in the "Accessories" section asking for advice and purchasing suggestions. I'll start playing with my 50mm 1.4 mid next week and then I'll look into getting lighting equipment in the near future.

    http://dgrin.com/showthread.php?t=67303

    Hopefully I'll have interesting shots to share...I've become so used to shooting with my 70-200 that I'll have to make a few perception adjustments to get acclimated :):


    -Troy (Dante)
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  • FlyingginaFlyinggina Registered Users Posts: 2,639 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2007
    Love ## 2, 3 and 4. Beautiful young woman. The lighting on #4 is wonderful.

    I really like the expressions on the faces of the women in #1 and the pose. Compelling. I find myself making up stories about these two. I agree with the others, though, that the harsh light, however, just doesn't work.

    I hope you continue to photograph people and to share some of your work here.

    Virginia
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  • OwenOwen Registered Users Posts: 948 Major grins
    edited July 28, 2007
    Why didn't you turn their heads in the first shot?
  • DanteDante Registered Users Posts: 109 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2007
    Flyinggina wrote:
    Love ## 2, 3 and 4. Beautiful young woman. The lighting on #4 is wonderful.

    I really like the expressions on the faces of the women in #1 and the pose. Compelling. I find myself making up stories about these two. I agree with the others, though, that the harsh light, however, just doesn't work.

    I hope you continue to photograph people and to share some of your work here.

    Virginia

    Thanks Virginia!

    Hopefully with a bit more practice, new 50mm lens and added lighting techniques, I'll have a few more to share.
    -Troy (Dante)
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  • DanteDante Registered Users Posts: 109 Major grins
    edited July 29, 2007
    Owen wrote:
    Why didn't you turn their heads in the first shot?
    Hello Owen,

    These were candid shots without posing and using a little longer lens. I was shooting on the other side of the house and when I would pass by where the ladies were I'd snap a shot here and there.
    -Troy (Dante)
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