Am I on the right track?

kombizzkombizz Banned Posts: 267 Major grins
edited August 8, 2007 in Other Cool Shots
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Where Do You Think You Will Be?


I am sitting on a mountain.
I am casting shadows into the sky.

I did not invite it but the sun has come
And is now playing tag with my feet.

I am whispering to clouds today,
“Watch out for my shoulders,”

For I wish no harm
To all my soft friends.

Where do you think you will Be
When God reveals Himself
Inside of you?

I was so glad to hear
That every pillow in this world
Will become stuffed with
My soul and beard.

I am sitting on a mountain range.
I am a precious body of living water
Offered to the earth
From Light’s own hands.

Why ever talk of miracles
When you are destined to become
Infinite love.

Still, the Final Grace was left:
For all of existence and Hafez to blend
And to find that I am every pillow
Offering comfort

To each mind and
Foot.

- Hafez

Comments

  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited August 8, 2007
    Very nice but why red ? what about black
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  • SkippySkippy Registered Users Posts: 12,075 Major grins
    edited August 8, 2007
    kombizz wrote:

    Hi there Kombizz .... I have to tell you my first impressions of this image was a CSI Crime Scene.

    A bloody foot print left at the scene of a murder.

    Forgive me, but to me it screams EVIDENCE, more so because you chose to use RED.

    Good shot, but it can be mistaken for something more sinister as well.

    Thanks for sharing :D ..... Skippy
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