Ch 33: Happy M

Angelo · February 23, 2005

mine, ALL mine!

rainforest1155 · February 23, 2005

Great smile!
Through the height of the picture I didn't saw why she's so happy in first place, but I got it after I scrolled down.

4labs · February 23, 2005

Angelo great shot I do have a problem with the DOF I would blur the backround somewhat if you could.Just my 2 cents

Angelo · February 23, 2005

4labs wrote:

Angelo great shot I do have a problem with the DOF I would blur the backround somewhat if you could.Just my 2 cents

Yeah, me too but I have no idea how to do that in post.

4labs · February 23, 2005

Angelo wrote:

Yeah, me too but I have no idea how to do that in post.

I just did a rush job to show you what I meant.. Hope you don't mind..

Angelo · February 23, 2005

4labs wrote:

I just did a rush job to show you what I meant.. Hope you don't mind..

I always prefer to take my time but as long as we're talking pictures....

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How did you do that?

4labs · February 23, 2005

Angelo wrote:

I always prefer to take my time but as long as we're talking pictures.... :

How did you do that?

Angelo now remember I am just learning PS similtaneously along with learning about photography. I duplicated the picture in another layer,added gausian blur and than erased the part I didn't want blurry. If you do it in a layer mask you can play around with the amount of blur.

Angelo · February 23, 2005

4labs wrote:

Angelo now remember I am just learning PS similtaneously along with learning about photography. I duplicated the picture in another layer,added gausian blur and than erased the part I didn't want blurry. If you do it in a layer mask you can play around with the amount of blur.

that all came to me like this: "bkwhfu sdkw sjvhsv mfkusvksb bvskjv nh skvjs alv skjhvb sjk dsjcbak" so I still need a translator!

rt88 · February 23, 2005

I like the image..... Was wondering about that smile till you see it all.....

RT88

Jenny · February 23, 2005

Did the bottle hurt? Possible "emotion": Discomfort.

just kidding!

ridetwistyroads · February 23, 2005

Jenny wrote:

Did the bottle hurt? Possible "emotion": Discomfort. just kidding!

Sorry, that's what I was thinking!

Great conveyance of emotion, we aren't left with ANY doubt of how she felt!

cletus · February 24, 2005

Angelo,

I'd say you definitely caught some emotion with that shot!

I just don't think the flash lighting is doing the picture justice. The flash caused the lighting to be really harsh and harsh lighting just doesn't work in this picture.

I would also agree with the other comments about the background distracting from your subject.

If I were you I'd try to reshoot. You've got a great composition and a great subject. With better light and a little less destraction from the background you are going to have an outstanding image.

Angelo · February 24, 2005

thanks everyone for all your comments. this represents a fun evening of poker at Monica's. My D70 was fresh out of the box that afternoon so I had NO idea what I was doing. I also only had the onboard flash and you see what THAT did (

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(Still want to learn how to blur a background myself.)

gubbs · February 24, 2005

Angelo,

Definite emotion and an explanation too! I agree with the other comments and if your going to try a reshoot try gettin down to chip level with a wide angle lens,

cletus · February 24, 2005

Angelo,

Looking at your picture some more I wanted to add that you need to watch the focus on her hands and the chips. Try to get them sharp!

Jenny · February 24, 2005

Angelo wrote:

thanks everyone for all your comments. this represents a fun evening of poker at Monica's. My D70 was fresh out of the box that afternoon so I had NO idea what I was doing. I also only had the onboard flash and you see what THAT did ().

(Still want to learn how to blur a background myself.)

Blurring the background is really easy with photoshop. I have photoshop 7 so if it is different from the other versions and I just end up confusing you more then I'm sorry. But anyway, click on the blur brush which in my version looks lke a raindrop. Then you can choose the size of the brush and the intensity and just click and hold the mouse button down where you want the bluring to be and go to town. Hope this helps. You can also create a new level and copy and paste the original picture into the new level so that way you can play around with the different effects without degrading the original. Just remember to flatten the image when you are done. Good Luck.

Angelo · February 24, 2005

Jenny wrote:

Blurring the background is really easy with photoshop. I have photoshop 7 so if it is different from the other versions and I just end up confusing you more then I'm sorry. But anyway, click on the blur brush which in my version looks lke a raindrop. Then you can choose the size of the brush and the intensity and just click and hold the mouse button down where you want the bluring to be and go to town. Hope this helps. You can also create a new level and copy and paste the original picture into the new level so that way you can play around with the different effects without degrading the original. Just remember to flatten the image when you are done. Good Luck.

Thanks Jenny
I don't have Photoshop but I'll look for equivalent blur tools in Corel. I'm sure the technique is similar.

As for the "new level", "flatten" etc.... whoa! I'm lost.

mslammers · February 24, 2005

Angelo,

I do know that sometimes it is hard to get "all" the ingredients arranged. If you could, and I say if, a green or black background would be good. It would remove distractions. I think you can do this in PS but it would take a lot of work. A green tarp or black tarp just draped over the fridge and stove might be the ticket.

Color and expression are good. Smile is great too.

Jenny · February 24, 2005

I know you dont have photoshop but I thought I'd show you what I mean with the layers. I don't know if this will help at all or just confuse you. I hope it helps. I have never used corel though so I'm not sure how to go about it with that. I'm no professional so I will try the best I can to tell you, but anyone who actually knows what they are talking about feel free to correct me.

If you have different layers then its like taking transparent sheets and placing them over the picture and doing your alterations to the sheets instead of the actual picture so you aren't degrading the original picture. When you flatten a picture it is kind of like melding all the layers into one, you make the alterations permanent then.

Angelo · February 24, 2005

Jenny wrote:

I know you dont have photoshop but I thought I'd show you what I mean with the layers. I don't know if this will help at all or just confuse you. I hope it helps. I have never used corel though so I'm not sure how to go about it with that. I'm no professional so I will try the best I can to tell you, but anyone who actually knows what they are talking about feel free to correct me. If you have different layers then its like taking transparent sheets and placing them over the picture and doing your alterations to the sheets instead of the actual picture so you aren't degrading the original picture. When you flatten a picture it is kind of like melding all the layers into one, you make the alterations permanent then.

Thanks Jenny; I understand the concept. I may be an analog man in a digital world but this reference to layering is really no different that the "layers" in drafting a building. I never mess with the original floorplan, I work on overlays and save them as individual films.
Here the problem is lack of practice since this is so new to me... oh to be in a darkroom again; at least I could count on getting high off the toner fumes.

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Jenny · February 24, 2005

Angelo wrote:

... oh to be in a darkroom again; at least I could count on getting high off the toner fumes. :

:lol4

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