Critique plz

evorywareevoryware Registered Users Posts: 1,330 Major grins
edited September 2, 2007 in People
1. I think I blew this one and didn't take care of the shadows well enough. She had come home late from work and was I didn't want to keep her too long. Should have moved the hair over her left eye more but I liked the way it was laying.
Flash left side @ 45 and reflector right.
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2. Exposed for background, 430 flash stood on ground with diffuser and fill from 580 on camera
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Thanks for looking!
Canon 40D : Canon 400D : Canon Elan 7NE : Canon 580EX : 2 x Canon 430EX : Canon 24-70 f2.8L : Canon 70-200mm f/2.8L USM : Canon 28-135mm f/3.5 IS : 18-55mm f/3.5 : 4GB Sandisk Extreme III : 2GB Sandisk Extreme III : 2 x 1GB Sandisk Ultra II : Sekonik L358

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Comments

  • phi75phi75 Registered Users Posts: 32 Big grins
    edited September 1, 2007
    nice work
    I like the work on second pic!
    very nice work, and good position of cobra.
    congrats
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  • photogmommaphotogmomma Registered Users Posts: 1,644 Major grins
    edited September 1, 2007
    I love #2! #1 might be nice with different lighting - definitely worth it. I really like how her hair is laying!

    Nice job!
    Andi

    www.tippiepics.com
  • evorywareevoryware Registered Users Posts: 1,330 Major grins
    edited September 2, 2007
    :D

    Thanks for the comments!
    Canon 40D : Canon 400D : Canon Elan 7NE : Canon 580EX : 2 x Canon 430EX : Canon 24-70 f2.8L : Canon 70-200mm f/2.8L USM : Canon 28-135mm f/3.5 IS : 18-55mm f/3.5 : 4GB Sandisk Extreme III : 2GB Sandisk Extreme III : 2 x 1GB Sandisk Ultra II : Sekonik L358

    dak.smugmug.com
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