dear harry and all

itscriticalitscritical Registered Users Posts: 56 Big grins
edited February 28, 2005 in Wildlife
Please check these out and all i ask for some response. i am young and i would love feedback.
:huh Philip

philipbaack.com

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  • itscriticalitscritical Registered Users Posts: 56 Big grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    another
    :huh Philip

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  • itscriticalitscritical Registered Users Posts: 56 Big grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    another one
    :huh Philip

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  • itscriticalitscritical Registered Users Posts: 56 Big grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    one more
    :huh Philip

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  • DoctorItDoctorIt Administrators Posts: 11,951 moderator
    edited February 28, 2005
    Hello and welcome... just two suggestions: can you post to another site and just link the photos (attachments get hard to work with)? second, these are all pretty small, hard to comment on anything but general composition.
    Erik
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  • HarrybHarryb Registered Users, Retired Mod Posts: 22,708 Major grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    Hi Phillip,

    The shots are kind of small so its hard to say much. How are you doing with your D70?

    Harry
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  • itscriticalitscritical Registered Users Posts: 56 Big grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    Harryb wrote:
    Hi Phillip,

    The shots are kind of small so its hard to say much. How are you doing with your D70?

    Harry
    first thank you for answering my post and second i really wish i had a canon digital instead of Nikon but my high school has given me the d70 all year with two lenses without charge or anything so it works. And last, the images are small because originally there were too big so i had to scale them down but most of them are on my website at philipbaack.com and if not ill have them on by tommorow.
    :huh Philip

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  • wxwaxwxwax Registered Users Posts: 15,471 Major grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    The D70's a great camera, nothing to apologize for, lots of folks would kill to have one.

    From what I can see, you have really nice background blur, and your exposures are well handled. Subject matter's nice without being special.

    My biggest feedback would be your composition. Looks like you always put your subject in the center of the frame. I assume you've learned about the rule of thirds? Using it would make these shots even better. Much more dynamic to put your subject on a third.

    Keep 'em coming, itscritical! thumb.gif
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  • johnojohno Registered Users Posts: 617 Major grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    I looked at your web site... you have some GREAT SHOTS. Good colors and perspective. High school huh? Well, you're on your way to a wonderful start.

    Look out Andy!rolleyes1.gif

    Doc is right... If you can link the image to your post. It will help.

    peace.
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  • itscriticalitscritical Registered Users Posts: 56 Big grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    how do you post a website instead of attaching my photos?
    i am new to this thing so help would be awesome
    thanks for comments its nice to hear anything back on your photos because there is always room for improvement.

    philip
    :huh Philip

    philipbaack.com
  • johnojohno Registered Users Posts: 617 Major grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    You need a place to host your own pics. When you want to drop a pic in your post hit the little icon above the text box that looks like a mountain. You will need to type the address that is hosting your pic.

    Example without brackets
    IMGhttp://www.youthimpact.com/photography/miriamplay-small.jpg/IMG

    When posted it looks like this
    miriamplay-small.jpg

    hope that helps.

    peace.
    johno~
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  • itscriticalitscritical Registered Users Posts: 56 Big grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    johno wrote:
    You need a place to host your own pics. When you want to drop a pic in your post hit the little icon above the text box that looks like a mountain. You will need to type the address that is hosting your pic.

    Example without brackets
    IMGhttp://www.youthimpact.com/photography/miriamplay-small.jpg/IMG

    When posted it looks like this
    miriamplay-small.jpg

    hope that helps.

    peace.
    johno~


    thanks. i think that will help

    philip
    :huh Philip

    philipbaack.com
  • AngeloAngelo Super Moderators Posts: 8,937 moderator
    edited February 28, 2005
    I looked at your website too...... 11doh.gif

    get out of here you rotten little kid :rambo

    I'm NEVER gonna win a challenge!!! :booze
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  • johnojohno Registered Users Posts: 617 Major grins
    edited February 28, 2005
    Angelo wrote:
    I looked at your website too...... 11doh.gif

    get out of here you rotten little kid :rambo

    I'm NEVER gonna win a challenge!!! :booze

    HA rolleyes1.gifrolleyes1.gifrolleyes1.gifrolleyes1.gif Angelo, you are so funny. You make me laugh.

    Don't worry Angelo, at the end of the school year his camera goes back to the school... You get to keep yours and make payments for it. :D

    peace.
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