hello, cupcake

indiegirlindiegirl Registered Users Posts: 930 Major grins
edited September 14, 2007 in The Dgrin Challenges
A new cupcake store opened downtown this week. Thought I'd use their faire for LPS 12.

If you had to guess which virutue I was trying to impart, which would you say (I have my intention and want to see if it jives with what your interp.). Also if you could be so kind as to vote for your pick for my entry.

Thanks and here's to many brightly colored cupcakes in your future.

1.
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2.
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3.
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C/C is always welcome.

hello, cupcake: choose this one 23 votes

Number one
8% 2 votes
Number two
21% 5 votes
Number three
65% 15 votes
None, keep shooting (and eating cupcakes!)
4% 1 vote

Comments

  • HoofClixHoofClix Registered Users Posts: 1,156 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2007
    1. Discipline/Restraint
    2. Patience
    3. Not a virtue, but the sin of Lust!
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  • VisualXpressionsVisualXpressions Registered Users Posts: 860 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2007
    Are you trying to say patience?

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  • mpmcleodmpmcleod Registered Users Posts: 288 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2007
    I like the tongue on 3 of course but I would like to see her eyes and bring her just a bit more in focus....
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  • wxwaxwxwax Registered Users Posts: 15,471 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2007
    Crop the bottom off #3 and you have a good idea.
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  • indiegirlindiegirl Registered Users Posts: 930 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2007
    195060130-L.jpg

    How's that?
  • LiquidAirLiquidAir Registered Users Posts: 1,751 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2007
    indiegirl wrote:

    How's that?

    Yup, that. :D
  • shatchshatch Registered Users Posts: 798 Major grins
    edited September 12, 2007
  • indiegirlindiegirl Registered Users Posts: 930 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2007
    nevermind
  • richterslrichtersl Registered Users Posts: 3,322 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2007
    thumb.gif I love #3!!!
  • TentacionTentacion Registered Users Posts: 940 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2007
    I Like number 3, but definently IMO I would crop down from the top, (the nose and glasses are a bit of a distraction). I would bring the crop down to just below the nostrils. I might also crop up from the bottom just a bit, (too much space), I think a perfect square crop would be wonderful here, cropping up from the bottom would elimnate some of the dark shadows and the eye would follow the curvature of the tablecloth/table, giving the flow a good in an out.

    To me the focal points of this are...The cupcake, the tongue action, the angle of the girls head, the red lips and the curvature of the tablecloth, and this is what needs to be brought out. All this is to me is DESIRE, LUST she can taste that cupcake in her mouth and as the commercial goes..."Anticipation is keeping me waiting"...Laughing.gif.


    But these are just my thoughts..

    Good luck
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  • Awais YaqubAwais Yaqub Registered Users Posts: 10,572 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2007
    Me agree 2
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  • indiegirlindiegirl Registered Users Posts: 930 Major grins
    edited September 13, 2007
    #4
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    #2 reprised
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    Any better? Which?
  • Tessa HDTessa HD Registered Users Posts: 852 Major grins
    edited September 14, 2007
    I like the composition in #2, but the content in #3! maybe crop a little of the white off the bottom of #3?

    I too have been working on kid versus sweet. I love your take!

    edit: i just saw your entry - great crop!
    Love to dream, and dream in color.

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