LPS 12 Forgive Me........

imax

How's everyone doing?Great entries so far, pressed for time but had taken these today with a willing participant. Don't worry she pulled through

Red



Blue





Black and White





Any thoughts?

THanks in advance........


Joe

Llywellyn

Love the little details and composition. The red version really does it for me. Makes it feel like its in some seedy motel with the neon lighting from a vacancy sign flooding in. It adds to the desperation for me.

pyroPrints.com

I like it. As far as the colors the first too are just too saturated. I think it should be in color but maybe a bit more subtle.

pemmett

Llywellyn wrote:

Love the little details and composition. The red version really does it for me. Makes it feel like its in some seedy motel with the neon lighting from a vacancy sign flooding in. It adds to the desperation for me.

Great shot.

indiegirl

pyroPrints.com wrote:

I like it. As far as the colors the first too are just too saturated. I think it should be in color but maybe a bit more subtle.

Yup. What he said. I like the color, just not so much.

Jesse

imax

Llywellyn wrote:

Love the little details and composition. The red version really does it for me. Makes it feel like its in some seedy motel with the neon lighting from a vacancy sign flooding in. It adds to the desperation for me.

That is exactly what we were going for (Seedy Hotel) And unfortunately toning it down just doesn't give it the same feel. So this is the one I entered I appreciate the input.

Joe

mpaulie

imax wrote:

That is exactly what we were going for (Seedy Hotel) And unfortunately toning it down just doesn't give it the same feel. So this is the one I entered I appreciate the input.

Joe

Love the red, I got the same impression right away. Perfect imagery for the scene that is set.

Tessa HD

indiegirl wrote:

Yup. What he said. I like the color, just not so much.

Jesse

ditto

Tentacion

Hey Joe...Nice work...Like 1 and 3

The red signifies to me blood, turmoil, the volatile and turbulent thoughts in her head. The red that has fallen on the crucifix is somewhat a religious interpretation to me "Blood of Christ", how he died for our sins, and what she has done or is doing is a sin, once again although in "symbolism" he dies again for her.

The b/w signifies the abyss that she has fallen in to, due to her darkened thoughts, she is lost, lonely, she knows no other way to pull herself out an up, again another interpretation of the "crucifix" because of the highlighting it proves that even in your darkest hours you are not alone.

Yeah, I know I'm whacked but that is what I saw.

Nice job interpretation on both compositions!!

3phase

Red shot is my fav, makes me think this takes place in some seedy hotel in the red light district - Nice work:D

Gary Glass

I like all three. Each suggests a different tone. The red suggests seedy depravity. The blue suggest somber despair. The black and white suggests gritty finality. All depends what you want to portray!

My only complaint is the title. Sentimental titles turn me off. On the other hand, I'm not a judge, so take that for what it's worth.

All in all, a clever and well-executed narrative composition. Good on ya.