Mine should get here today!! I can't wait to start taking some shots with an f/1.4. I only hope I can capture some quality shots such as this one! Great shot
Generally, I think this is a very nice portrait. I'd like to see some more detail in the highlight of his forehead. Perhaps a more technical B&W conversion would accomplish this. Also perhaps could open up some detail in the eyes. Perhaps highlight/shadow before the conversion?
Thanks for the comments and help, here's a 2nd attempt
I used a masked levels layer to lift the exposure slightly on the eyes,
spent more time playing with the channel mixer and ended up with the following settings red -16 green +98 blue +82
added some grain on ann overlay neutral gray layer
so what's an old fart like you doing snuggling up with good looking young people like that?
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I agree that the face and background are much better in the second version. I don't like what it did to the hair and the back of his hand. You can layer the new version on top of the old one and mask out some of this (perhaps with < 100% opacity.)
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Love it
Have to look at this lens
Thanks
Fred
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I used a masked levels layer to lift the exposure slightly on the eyes,
spent more time playing with the channel mixer and ended up with the following settings red -16 green +98 blue +82
added some grain on ann overlay neutral gray layer
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Catapultam habeo. Nisi pecuniam omnem mihi dabis, ad caput tuum saxum immane mittam
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"The Edge... there is no honest way to explain it because the only people who really know where it is are the ones who have gone over."-Hunter S.Thompson
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I would adjust the exposure so her face isn't in the shadow so much from the back lighting. Nice candid shot though.