first wedding...round 2!

ElaineElaine Registered Users Posts: 3,532 Major grins
edited September 26, 2007 in Weddings
I'm still creeping my way through pp on the wedding I helped shoot on Sept 15. Thankfully, I was just the volunteer second shooter and not getting paid a penny, so there are no real expectations or pressure placed on me. Thought I'd share a few different shots this time...
C&C welcome!

1 - This bride was full of expressions!
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2
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3
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4
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4 - Colors still don't seem right here...maybe I should just go B&W.
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5 - I love this one!
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6 - What you do when you completely blow out the dress but still want to salvage the shot...do you think it works at all??
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9
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link to unfinished gallery:
http://e-heasley.smugmug.com/gallery/3490464#200170334
Elaine

Comments and constructive critique always welcome!

Elaine Heasley Photography

Comments

  • nicoleshillidaynicoleshilliday Registered Users Posts: 549 Major grins
    edited September 25, 2007
    i think number 6 is a great shot! the lack of detail in the dress makes you look at the groom. I also like #1 & 2.
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  • ElaineElaine Registered Users Posts: 3,532 Major grins
    edited September 26, 2007
    i think number 6 is a great shot! the lack of detail in the dress makes you look at the groom. I also like #1 & 2.

    Thanks, Nicole! And welcome to DGrin!
    Elaine

    Comments and constructive critique always welcome!

    Elaine Heasley Photography
  • dlacouturedlacouture Registered Users Posts: 40 Big grins
    edited September 26, 2007
    Hello!
    Nice shots!
    For #6, I'd go heavier on the vignetting effect (quite present in all the corners except for the dress). It should lessen the whiteness effect.
    I'd also try to tone down the wooden handrail, say to the level of the vertical supports, as it's quite distracting.
  • GiselleGiselle Registered Users Posts: 367 Major grins
    edited September 26, 2007
    #8 is my favorite, but I would like to see it with a tighter crop
    Giselle
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