comments please~ 3rd wedding

nicoleshilliday

Hello, i am new to this but wanted to show some of my shots from my latest wedding. Please let me know what you think! i am looking for any comments that might help for future shots.

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Giselle

I like 7 the most, I wish that guy in the back could have quit eating for a minute, he is the only one not paying attention!

jeffreaux2

The BW ones are fabulous. On the color shots, watch the red in the skin tones. Good job overall!!

scottV

flash seems a little harsh on #2...but i really like 7 & 5

nonilady

i love the composition for 5,6,7:D

urbanaries

Cute series! I like #1 but could benefit from a tighter crop (and skintones seem red as someone else mentioned!)

I am not sure about cutting her eyes off in #4, however, I really like #5, and #7 is just AMAZING!!!! Absolutely love that one! I think it's funny and "real" that the guy is still grazing in the background. Lots of emotion, joy, beauty and interest in this image. Way to go!

nicoleshilliday

f00sion wrote:

flash seems a little harsh on #2...but i really like 7 & 5

Thanks for you comments. 5 is my fav!

Maybe i am not seeing it, but i don't see how the flash is harsh on #2...but could be my lack experience. Thanks again.

nicoleshilliday

jeffreaux2 wrote:

The BW ones are fabulous. On the color shots, watch the red in the skin tones. Good job overall!!

I will work on the red tones in the skin. Thanks for all the great comments.

Shay Stephens

What I like about these are they feel fun and you have a lot of interaction between the people in the shots. It is interesting to look at, even for someone who does not know the couple. There are even unconventional shots like the cigar puff both in content (a bride with a cigar) and composition (not seeing the eyes) that I find add interest too. You definitely have an eye for photojournalistic wedding photography.

Refining your technique and lighting will go a long way toward helping you deliver high quality work, which is the case with everyone, but you don't have far to go. And a bit of experience there is all you really need and you have already gotten some good advice. Great work! I hope we see more

nicoleshilliday

Shay Stephens wrote:

What I like about these are they feel fun and you have a lot of interaction between the people in the shots. It is interesting to look at, even for someone who does not know the couple. There are even unconventional shots like the cigar puff both in content (a bride with a cigar) and composition (not seeing the eyes) that I find add interest too. You definitely have an eye for photojournalistic wedding photography.

Refining your technique and lighting will go a long way toward helping you deliver high quality work, which is the case with everyone, but you don't have far to go. And a bit of experience there is all you really need and you have already gotten some good advice. Great work! I hope we see more

Shay~ you have no idea how much fun they were having. I have never been to a wedding like this one before. And i thought my own Wedding was fun! Thanks for your kind words.